  Nemesis Jedi 2006-05-23 . chapter 2 A very intriguing concept you have here, and you're off to a nice start.
Taka seems like an interesting character and I love her reaction towards our ever so lovable 13th master. I wonder how she came to meet Kenshin, though it seems that Hiko already has all the information he needs... certain 'circles' eh? Even though they just met it seems that Hiko already has the advantage.
Heh, I felt sorry for Kaoru, but I don't think she has anything to worry about. I don't believe that the relationship between the two is that intimate and if it was that time has passed... well at least that's what I think anyway.
What really caught my attention, though, is when you mentioned the future relationship between Taka and Hiko and by the looks of things what a relationship it'll be. Could it be that Hiko finally met his match, if not in swordplay than in wit? In any case it seems that the two will quite delightfully step all over each others nerves and anyone who can rose Hiko's mischievous side with a simple glance on his part, while spelling doom and destruction for all those who make their home in the Kamiya Dojo, will undoubtedly give us lots of entertainment, no?
Sorry for the tedious review, but this story looks promising and I can't wait to see what happens next. |
 charmed-sword 2006-05-15 . chapter 2Enjoyed this chapter very much! And am liking Taka very much, the way she's standing up to Hiko! Hee hee, poor Kaoru, when I read the water buffalo part I nearly choked on my drink. Lol! Kenshin as usual, continues digging a deeper grave for himself, when it comes to explaining things to Kaoru. And I am quite intrigued as to Taka's relationship with Kenshin. I'm quite intrigued full stop! I can't wait till you post again! |
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