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| Aangs#1fan 2006-05-20 ch 1, anon. | abuse...i was expecting a better fight, it was good otherwise. |
| Aero-Dragon's-Sky 2006-05-16 ch 1, | abuseIt is good, but Aang is a little ooc... he doesn't really whine constantly like that, but it is your first story and is really good ^_^ |