This is an interesting story! So Riku forgot, too, huh? Good thing he never told Sora. *wink*

Anywho, when are you going to update? You haven't since 5/21/06.

Kouji-wolf

This is pretty cool! It's definitely not the kind of thing I'd normally like, but you've pulled it off very well; I like it. I'm looking forward to seeing where you'll take this.

So Riku's forgotten Sora...

Neat. ^^

wow! Nice chapter! I love this story!

wow i really like this story! hope you update soon!

oops, forgot to add you to the list.

Really cool writing, though I think only Zexion and Riku had the "identify by scent" ability. Too bad that never comes up in KH2. Anyways, I look forwards to the next update!

Shame on Axel, tourturing Riku like that! The cute guys arn't allowed to kill each other! How many times do I have to tell them? *sigh* Here's your cookie. I have to go beat Axel sensless now and yell at Riku for being so careless. Update soon!

Durfy. Didn't see a third chapter available. The summary on the storylist said there were only 2 chapters. *sigh*

Oh well, this gives me a chance to praise you on the job you did with Namine in ch. 2 and with the D.Island kids in ch. 3. I loved how you used Namine's pictures, the colors, representing the feeling she got when she thought about Kairi. It was very well done.

I see ch. 3 is longer. Woo! I liked it. :3

Keep writing.

-Tig

You're quite the author. I enjoyed ch. 1 & 2, I hope you keep writing.

On a side note...

THANK YOU for saying "would have". Most people say "would of" or "should of" and it drives me INSANE. So thank you for being grammatically sound.

It would seem to me that you're talented enough to lengthen the chapters a little bit, or even splice some together. Short chapters are good, but some people look at the length of a chapter and ignore it if it isn't a certain quota. I do that with people who bold everything or have one paragraph as a chapter, so I know I'm not imagining things. And I know those people may really be talented, but it drives me nuts to see so much in one paragraph, etc. It's a personal thing.

Oop, I'm rambling. Nice job, I'll look forward to the next chapter(s).

-Tig

You are a really good writer.

And you got Mickey's diction down pat. Good job.

I only had time to reach one chapter. I'll read more soon.

Cool! I can't wait to find out what happens next!

Really good. I always wondered what happened to Riku during that time since Sora's heart was all messeded up and Riku was connected to him. Anywho, update!

Wow! I'm really interested, and I haven't even played COM. Poor riku! Please update soon!

Nice. You're very good at depicting the sort of memory loss and fuzz that came in CoM and II, how Riku can no longer remember Sora. Keep up the good work!
And some advice for Riku: "Yeah, and if wishes were horses, we'd all be eating steak!" - Jayne Cobb