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| Cyraxr 2008-08-18 ch 12,  | abuseWow this is really good and I hope it continues. I don't know if you have heard or not but in canon the Forth Hokage is Naruto's father and his name is Minato something and Naruto's mother is a former ninja from the land of Whirlpools(has been destroyed) named Kushina Uzumaki. Also his personality and jutsu chose is very similar to her's. Not sure when she died but everybody refers to her in the past tense. You should not do temp harem girls it is not fair to everybody taking part. As far as I know Nii is Yugito's family name. Please update soon. Signed a fan of Tayuya, Hinata, Anko, Kurenai, and Temari. |
| cows 2008-08-09 ch 12, | abuseupdate faster! |
| swordbunny4486 2008-08-05 ch 12, | abuseTsunade had better bash Danzou... And will there be a threesome? this is very interesting. |
| Jack Shit 2008-07-30 ch 12, | abuseThe story i just great! (stands on knees, begging and crying anime tears) PLS PLS PLS keep updating PLS |
| Dante Elric or WDG 2008-06-24 ch 12, | abusenice |
| Doom-Chan 2008-05-22 ch 12, | abuseYOSH YOUR YOUTHFUL PARING OF SASUKE AND TAYUYA HAS INSPIRED ME TO FIND MORE OF THE SAME! AND IF I CANNOT FIND ANY I SHALL WRIGHT MY OWN! AND IF I CANNOT DO THAT I SH-(record scratches) Okay, that's quite enough of that. as for form's 7 and 8 I have some ideas on that. although it would be a tad effeminate a naginata would be kinda cool(naginata are tradionaly used by women BTW) What I would really like to see is a kitsura-gama (chain and sickle) |
| Kyuubinaruto634 2008-05-16 ch 12, | abuseupdate fast love the story |
| Kyuubinaruto634 2008-05-15 ch 5, | abusegood story |
| Demon hidden in the light 2008-04-26 ch 1, | abuseI like it!:D |
| Suifox 2008-04-21 ch 12, | abuseWill you be updating this story? |
| TheFatAlchemist 2008-04-15 ch 12, | abuseUPDATE UPDATE UPDATE SOON SOON SOON! |
| inuficcrzy 2008-04-06 ch 12, | abusewhoa. very interesting. cant' wait to see how you work all this out! |
| karaku-chan 2008-04-03 ch 9, | abusei love the story as much as i've read of it, and the neji part was funny.XD it doesn't help that i just got done watching that part on the japanese episodes. |
| KantoTheSlayer 2008-03-22 ch 2, | abuseOkay, second chapter here. And wow, what a chapter. I don't think it was rushed at all. Matter of fact, it was right on the money. I consider this a rather intuitive decision, much akin to most good writers. It's sweet, it's believable, and it's got me hooked. I'm locked in until the endgame; congratulations. |
| Chaos728 2008-03-20 ch 1, | abuseI just wanted to know if this is a Naruto/Harem Fanfic? If it is, I will be adding it to My Naruto C2: A Hero's Harem. |