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| Foghorn-clj87 2008-06-13 ch 6, | abuseokay I can't beleive i'm going to say this about Brennan, but that was such a cruel thing to do! As if he would take advantage of her while they've been drinking! |
| ScribLL 2008-06-10 ch 31, anon. | abuseThis read just like an episode, well done. I especially liked the bookend fights--Brennon's sparring with Booth at the beginning and then the fight in earnest with Charlie at the end. |
| mumrulz 2007-09-19 ch 1, | abuseI know that this story was completed quite some time ago, but just wanted to let you know that I really enjoyed it. Although you had me a bit worried halfway when they both started questioning (especially Brennan)about starting a relationship. But I shouldn't have worried you had everything back on track pretty quickly...if only!LOL. |
| Kelei 2007-02-19 ch 31, | abuseKinda predictable when it comes to the whodunit... honestly, i knew straight away. But a good read, i enjoyed it and all characters very in... character. And loving bb... never actually read one where they had a relationship during, and not just at the end. So cool. |
| PurplePicklesUnite 2007-01-04 ch 31, | abuseOuch my eyes hurt but i couldnt stop reading! Nice cute ending too! |
| Izzy4 2006-08-28 ch 31, anon. | abuseI really enjoyed your fic. The story was well thought out, the characterisations were good and the writing was excellent. Thanks for sharing it with us. Izzy |
| espergirl04 2006-08-21 ch 31, | abuseLOVED IT! |
| artigiano 2006-08-19 ch 31, | abusei love it! it's a great ending! |
| 18lzytwner 2006-08-15 ch 31, | abuseWow! Didn't see that coming. Good story. Hope we get to find out Booth and Rebecca's decision. |
| Capa 2006-08-15 ch 31, | abusethis was such a good story! it was great! will u be writing other stories? if so i cant wait! |
| invis 2006-08-14 ch 31, | abuseI'm so glad Rebecca didn't turn out to be a nasty biznatch in this. I've always felt kind of bad for her. I mean, yeah, all we know of her in the series is that she's an unreasonable (and possibly insane, because--turning down a marriage proposal from Booth? Yeah...) woman who doesn't give Booth much time with his son, but I know there's got to be more to it than that. It's great that you didn't blithely put Brennan and Booth together without factoring Parker into it, too. Great job! And I didn't realize how long it was until I noticed the chapter number. Wow! :) |
| 18lzytwner 2006-08-14 ch 30, | abuseWay to keep a secret, Brennan! ;) Poor Zach. |
| BonesDBchippie 2006-08-14 ch 31, | abuseINTERESTING Ending~~I LIKED IT!! Not what I expected, but what a nice turn! Truly well done and nicely thought out!! Looking forward to your next ff!! GREAT JOB! |
| astridv 2006-08-14 ch 31, | abuseGood way to wrap up the story. Now I'm looking forward to your next one. :o) >As the squints left her office to recommence work, Brennan turned to Booth with a satisfied smile on her face. “I don’t think they guessed a thing,” she said confidently. *snicker* >I never expected it to be this long, honest. But thanks for sticking with me. Long is good! Vignettes and drabbles are all good and well, but I always appreciate writers who take the time to write longer plotfic. |
| mendenbar 2006-08-14 ch 31, | abuseHuzzah and well done for a neatly crafted, enjoyable story. Thanks. |