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Foghorn-clj87
2008-06-13
ch 6,
abuseokay I can't beleive i'm going to say this about Brennan, but that was such a cruel thing to do! As if he would take advantage of her while they've been drinking!
ScribLL
2008-06-10
ch 31, anon.
abuseThis read just like an episode, well done. I especially liked the bookend fights--Brennon's sparring with Booth at the beginning and then the fight in earnest with Charlie at the end.
mumrulz
2007-09-19
ch 1,
abuseI know that this story was completed quite some time ago, but just wanted to let you know that I really enjoyed it. Although you had me a bit worried halfway when they both started questioning (especially Brennan)about starting a relationship. But I shouldn't have worried you had everything back on track pretty quickly...if only!LOL.
Kelei
2007-02-19
ch 31,
abuseKinda predictable when it comes to the whodunit... honestly, i knew straight away.

But a good read, i enjoyed it and all characters very in... character. And loving bb... never actually read one where they had a relationship during, and not just at the end. So cool.
PurplePicklesUnite
2007-01-04
ch 31,
abuseOuch my eyes hurt but i couldnt stop reading! Nice cute ending too!
Izzy4
2006-08-28
ch 31, anon.
abuseI really enjoyed your fic. The story was well thought out, the characterisations were good and the writing was excellent. Thanks for sharing it with us.

Izzy
espergirl04
2006-08-21
ch 31,
abuseLOVED IT!
artigiano
2006-08-19
ch 31,
abusei love it! it's a great ending!
18lzytwner
2006-08-15
ch 31,
abuseWow! Didn't see that coming. Good story. Hope we get to find out Booth and Rebecca's decision.
Capa
2006-08-15
ch 31,
abusethis was such a good story!
it was great!
will u be writing other stories?
if so i cant wait!
invis
2006-08-14
ch 31,
abuseI'm so glad Rebecca didn't turn out to be a nasty biznatch in this. I've always felt kind of bad for her. I mean, yeah, all we know of her in the series is that she's an unreasonable (and possibly insane, because--turning down a marriage proposal from Booth? Yeah...) woman who doesn't give Booth much time with his son, but I know there's got to be more to it than that. It's great that you didn't blithely put Brennan and Booth together without factoring Parker into it, too. Great job!

And I didn't realize how long it was until I noticed the chapter number. Wow! :)
18lzytwner
2006-08-14
ch 30,
abuseWay to keep a secret, Brennan! ;) Poor Zach.
BonesDBchippie
2006-08-14
ch 31,
abuseINTERESTING Ending~~I LIKED IT!! Not what I expected, but what a nice turn! Truly well done and nicely thought out!! Looking forward to your next ff!! GREAT JOB!
astridv
2006-08-14
ch 31,
abuseGood way to wrap up the story. Now I'm looking forward to your next one. :o)

>As the squints left her office to recommence work, Brennan turned to Booth with a satisfied smile on her face. “I don’t think they guessed a thing,” she said confidently.

*snicker*

>I never expected it to be this long, honest. But thanks for sticking with me.

Long is good! Vignettes and drabbles are all good and well, but I always appreciate writers who take the time to write longer plotfic.
mendenbar
2006-08-14
ch 31,
abuseHuzzah and well done for a neatly crafted, enjoyable story. Thanks.
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