I like your writing style. Something about it.
I thought Jo was pretty in-character, which is a good thing, obviously. Meg was just a bit OOC, but I'm looking over it.
Interesting start.

Ok...so I just went way past my bedtime to read this whole thing in one go...oh my parents are going to kill me but I just couldn't stop reading! Ok...ok...I'm done... No I'm not that was AMAZING!

Okay. How is Jo hearing the person talk inside her head... I'm too confused.

oh awsome!...you should write more for this pairing.

When I first saw this story I assumed that it would be a giant mound of angst; at least from what the summary showed, and passed over it, 'cause angst keeps me up at night... Turns out it's not. At least not yet.

This is a good story. Maybe the best story I've read in a long time. The fact that it's finished is an added bonus; never liked waiting for an ending.

The... sex scenes, I'm going to say, were actually really nice, a big hell of a-lot better than some of the ones I've read before. And me, The flaming pervert than I am, am a good judge of sex scenes (this sentence made me feel a bit dirty...). Even if I always end up giggling and looking over my shoulder, I cant help it. Just in case someone's secretly filming me I scoff occasionally to make sure they don't think I like it... I'm weird...

But I ended up reading the one in chapter four (several chapters) twice (several times).

... this sort of comes across as a bit disturbing doesn't it? well, hope I dont freak anyone out.

again, damn good job. -faving-

-this was not intended to be creepy, if it was, ignore it. I will not bother you again.-

Ah! Amy ruined the moment! T.T
Lol I also pictured all the things Meg did in the end XD I would fall out of chair if it was animated XD XD XD

Even though it was written long time ago... I like first chapter^^ Will see what is next =P

awesome story thus far please do update soon

interesting, the last chapter was pretty cute. but overall it seemed rather confusing...

~dreamer

TOOK ME HOURS TO READ IT COMPLETE, I FINISHED READING IT AT 4 AM,... AND I LOVED IT XD

You are amazing. The combo of sex, sensuality, yet the loving undertones was fantastic. Do you mind writing an Utena fic? That would be great!

Hello, I'm a big JoXMeg fan and I have to say you portrayed all the characters so accurately...It's so believable and true to the series. I love your story and I'd like to thank you for writing it. ^_^

:D
p.s. I know what you're talking about...techno and slutty writing...

as for reviews, since the story is done anyways, I'll leave a :D for every chapter I especially liked...im a perv...but what anime otaku hates yuri..err..yuriness?! xD anyways here is the 'review'

:D

She’d taken a hold of her then, hadn’t considered what would happen if she did, but in the blur of imminent pleasure, it didn’t seem important. The breast in her hand was a firm, supple mound and her fingers had squeezed, curiosity and desire caught in a silken web of Meg’s long red hair, as she buried her face in "his" neck and waited for the other girl to stop arching and shaking.


Uh I just thought that you'd like to edit the "his" part ^_^:;; it might destroy the excellent mood you brought out. Don't get me wrong though. I really like this fanfic ^__^ Good Work!