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The Wise Duck 2008-09-24 ch 23,	abuseAnother good story in this series. I just get so jazzed about the way that you handle to two of them. This is so much a series about them rather than missions. In many ways I’m a green-eyed duck. If some of these like themes start showing up in my later works, you’ll know where I got the inspiration from. Poor Kim and her freckles. I just shake my head and grin every time they attack her. And if ‘old married’ bathroom issues are issues to her she’s got some growing up to do. What have they done on missions all those years? I know that Ron puts her comfort and privacy first but still. The party was too evil; and for me all too real considering how many just like that I’ve broken up over the years. And while I agree that James had every reason to blow (at least he didn’t pop the kids one right in front of a group of cops - saw that happen at least 3-4 times) he did take it too far in my mind, something that you handled very deftly in the subsequent sections. Several very interesting sections on teen introspection running throughout this installment. Some of it is all too painful to read—which of course makes it all the more realistic. Anne must have acquired an amazing amount of bodily control from standing in those operating theaters all those years to run like that without leaking. It’s good to see that they can have a real disagreement and fight. Makes them all the more real. And their moods/reactions was very much in character for the both of them. It would have been nice too see however how they resolved the problem without a kidnapping. And I certainly hope that the wedding (when it happens) goes better than the proposal did (although it was enjoyable in a masochistic way) Thoroughly enjoying this as in not getting anything else done. The Wise Duck
XyKPfan 2008-07-15 ch 18,	abuseThere's only two people 'villians' Ron would be worried about: Monkey Fist, who is still in jail, and the other, well I'm not going to say for some folks read reviews before they read the story but I do know who the other is. You'd have to read Commanders previous fic to now who it is hint hint
XyKPfan 2008-07-15 ch 16,	abuseGreat chappy Commander! As for the fight between the lovebirds, I'd have to say I agree with Ron; that is being a little unreasonable(ok maybe more so). And glad to know she realizes that. As for her captor, I know exactly who it is(not just because I read it before)! But there's only one of her enemy's would have a A emblazoned in the center of their uniform whose seeking long lasted revenge!
XyKPfan 2008-07-14 ch 7,	abuseWhat were they speaking of that some bystanders would misunderstand?
GovernorDerek 2007-11-02 ch 23,	abuseMORE!
Drakonis Aurous 2007-09-19 ch 22,	abuseAnother great one. So Kim and Ron are finally adults...K on to the next of the series.
MidnightzStorm 2007-02-13 ch 23,	abuseWonderful story!
MidnightzStorm 2007-02-13 ch 21,	abuseI loved how that all came together. Awesome chapter!
MidnightzStorm 2007-02-11 ch 11,	abuseVery nice parent/child interaction in this chapter.
laura1990 2006-11-20 ch 23,	abusei luv this story. it rocks! but i want to know are you from a arabic contry, because you wrote about Egypt and Kuwiat. i'm from Egypt, but i live in London. please write more fantastic romance stories for KP and RS. thanks cya Laura R. PS: i read all you KP and RS stories, so please write a new story soon, bye!
Ugly Duckling 2006-08-28 ch 23,	abuseWhy do I get the feeling that Agent Alpha is Will Du!?
xthedarkone 2006-06-13 ch 23, anon.	abuseAgian Commander great fic really nice work. but now I have a problem I know all your stories all link up but which on comes after countdown? I dare not read one in case I miss anything what about the road trip they take I would appriate if you could help me out I really want to follow this. Get back to me when you can Bro. Later.
Darkcloudalpha 2006-06-02 ch 23,	abuseAnother great story. I love the continuity you have going between the show and your other works. I loved realizing that Ron's proposal scene was coming. Also loved how Ron, Wade and the Tweebs trashed the bad guys in this one without even needing to call Kim. Shows how well everyones skill is progressing.
Zaratan 2006-06-02 ch 23,	abusePoor Ron, nothing seemed to go right. Car broken down, forced to get a ride from Bonnie, the power goes out, the sprinklers came on, nothing went well... well, maybe one thing. ;)
Zaratan 2006-06-02 ch 22,	abusePoor Mrs. P., getting her hopes up like that, and then bringing them crashing down... twice! And people call me evil! lol Eagerly awaiting more!

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