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KinHikari
2008-05-20 . chapter 4
It's a rare treat to read a fanfic about when Nancy and the Hardy brothers were kids. Especially when it's well written. Please update soon!
LazyPanther
2007-05-19 . chapter 4
Ok, I can not believe that I haven't reviewed the last three chapters! How is that even possible? I know I've been reading them. I'm so sorry for being forgetful and not reviewing. Believe me, it's not because I don't like the story.
I really am interested in seeing what's going to happen to the three junior detectives. It sounds like they might have an actual mystery to solve. For Joe: The Mystery of the Missing Necklace. For Frank and Nancy: The Mystery of the Missing Little Brother. :)
katie janeway
2007-04-29 . chapter 4
Aw...the midget versions of our trio are adorable! It's clear, too, to see the resemblances to their older selves. I can't wait for the next update!
An-Jelly-Ca
2007-04-27 . chapter 4
GLAD U UPDATED! I loved it! Update soon!
Jen711
2007-04-21 . chapter 4
I'm still reading!
Update soon please
SUPERNATURALfreakisJOBROFAN19
2007-04-21 . chapter 4
Something tells me that the neckles conversation that Joe had over heard is a misleading clue for Joe
Coyote Phillips
2007-04-18 . chapter 1
I'm loving this already. Actually, it was the reviews that made me go and read this thing at a quarter to midnight on a school night. The young Hardys sure are fun to write, aren't they? (Not to mention that if you grew up with another sibling you can write from your own experience what it's like being little and having an annoying younger brother :D)
Roswalyn
2007-04-18 . chapter 4
Yay, yay, yay! (happy dance) You updated!! I'm so glad that you haven't given up on this story, because I truly enjoy this glimpse into our favorite detectives' childhood. You capture their young personalities so well, with Joe's precociousness, Frank's protective older brother attitude, and Nancy's determination even when things are looking down. And, of course, who can resist a little hand-holding between Nan and Frank, even if they are just kids! ;-)

Great chapter, and I can't wait for the next update!
whitetigers
2007-04-18 . chapter 1
Finally! I was wondering when you'd update. This is such a great story! Am looking forward to more. Little Joe is such a cutie. Hope Frank and Nancy find him soon. The characters are written perfectly. Couldn't have done a better job.
little miss nancy drew
2006-10-19 . chapter 3
How cute :3

You've really got the characters down, I envy you. Wish I could do that.

ANYWAY, good story, update soon!
avidreader
2006-07-15 . chapter 3
Please don’t think that your story is boring!! It is very cute and funny. It's a real treat to get to see these characters as children; it's amazing that you're able to portray them at this age. And there's a lot you could do to put some "mystery" into the story that they could solve. Plus you could show how the connection between F/N started that would be cool. And if you are at a loss of what the mystery they could solve being so young... well you do have them roaming a big hotel, maybe they could overhear someone planning to do something "bad" at the conference their fathers are at. nothing big since they are young and don’t really understand a lot but maybe something like someone posing to be an office/investigator who really is going to steal something like a new police invention or something (sorry not too great with ideas...) but I’m sure you get my point. You could make it really funny that these little kids were able to figure the mystery out and foil things even if it may be "accidental". I hope you get some inspiration and update this soon.
Roswalyn
2006-06-14 . chapter 3
Wow, I've been really delinquent in reviewing lately, haven't I? Sorry about the delay in telling you how much I enjoyed this chapter, and how much I'm enjoying this story overall! You bring such a refreshing perspective to these three because you're writing them at an age that we're not used to seeing them at, and you're writing them realistically -- I can *see* Joe and Nancy and Frank being exactly like this as children. I don't find this story boring at all -- lines like Joe thinking that he'll absolutely die before he gets his cake had me laughing out loud. If anything, the one thing that I would say is that as a reader, I'm wondering where this is going -- is there going to be a real mystery? Their first "adult" mystery, perhaps? Or is the story going to be about their escapades as "secret agents"? Inquisitive readers want to know!! :)
4everndfh
2006-06-08 . chapter 3
I'm loving this little story. It is just so cute, seeing them as children & carefree, curious, & innocent without the adult worries that comes with aging. The part you put with Joe & the candy was hillarious, I can just imagine him being too hyper and having his mom restrict his sugar supply. (my mom always did that to me too, said I was too hyperactive). I can't wait to see Fenton & Carson's reactions to finding their children missing. I also like Nancy's take charge attitude & Frank's "I know everything" behavior. Update again soon. (don't worry this chap was not boring) ;p
An-Jelly-Ca
2006-06-08 . chapter 3
I like it! Ca't wait 4 more!
TesubCalle
2006-06-07 . chapter 3
'Boring' ?! No way! It's entertaining in a way no other NDHB fic could be, since you're using such a drastically different perspective. Half the fun is seeing how these characters were as children. I keep hoping Nancy's going to break out and tell Frank to stop being such a darn know-it-all. But she remains blithely unaware of her errors. Joe, of course, is always funny with his flair for hyberbole! (Two hours til cake time? How will the poor lad ever survive?) Ha ha! What I want to see is how he pulls off being one of the invited members of the party...
Keep it up! This is truly a lot of fun.
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