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Reviews For: The Enumeration of Grief
titania61194 2008-08-07 . chapter 7
This is beautiful...those who have lost someone in their lives can truly connect with this story.
Nikokami 2007-09-04 . chapter 7
I think that epilogue was a good idea! people do like to have people like Iroh to have another chance! GO IROH! (dorry -_-; I'm not a really good critique... I'm better at going all YAY! GO! that sort of stuff... hehe) ^^~
Junsui Chikyuu 2006-06-02 . chapter 7
Very, very nice. Loved it. You write Iroh well.
Raika 2006-05-22 . chapter 7
Very well writen! I especially like the epilogue, great job!
DeepSoul7 2006-05-19 . chapter 7
Wow, I must say your writing amazes me. It is so good, the wording is perfect and the storyline comes together so well. You are very talented as a writer and I hope you continue to write cause you're naturally gifted.
storm-of-insanity 2006-05-19 . chapter 5
iroh got robbed? when did that happen?!?!

sorry that was off track -.-U anway, back to this fic

I LOVE THIS FIC. i like the paragraph about the knife offering advice.
starvoidangel 2006-05-19 . chapter 7
This was good...I liked how you portray the characters. Good job!

Although, the previous Firelord's name was Azulon, not Zulon. Azula is named after him. (just thought to point that out)

Anyways, good job and I'm favoriting this.

SVA
Earth Star 2006-05-19 . chapter 1
(claps)
Well done! I think this was well written. You don't see that many stories that focus only on Iroh. Good work!
Lady Iapetus Roving Wanderer 2006-05-17 . chapter 3
Whoa. Iroh mad with grief, enough so that he can take out two Earth Kingdom regiments all by himself? Something I do NOT want to see. Seriously, scary stuff that.
Lady Iapetus Roving Wanderer 2006-05-16 . chapter 2
Oh...wow...
lilaly171 2006-05-16 . chapter 1
I love it! Well Written. Keep up the good work. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Slate 2006-05-16 . chapter 1
This is a truly beautiful story. Keep up the great work!
chicken123 2006-05-16 . chapter 2
this is very well written!! keep it up!!
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