would love to read the rest of the story.. thanks

Uh, knock knock? Anyone still writing this story? It's been well over a year... Please do finish, it's such a wonderful fict.

Hey, I hope you're still out there. I just wanted to comment on your wonderful fanfic. The first time I read this was a little over a year ago. I was so entranced I read the entire story in one sitting. After I finished Chapter 23, I salivated for more. I hope you will continue at some point. After all, there is Shep angst, the return of an evil SG-1 character, and Google. Plus, it'll be interesting to see the reaction of the Atlantis people to Sheppard's predicament. In short, it's a very thrilling story, and I do hope you continue soon.

Please please please continue!! I want to find out how Sheppard copes, if he tells anyone what happened, how will he react to women in the future etc etc etc eagarly awaiting your talents! Faerie5

Wow I just read all the way through to this chapter and it's really good. Really well written if a bit dark and loving the Shep whump. How on Earth (more accurately Atlantis) is he going to deal with this trauma. Can't wait for more keep the good stuff coming.

update soon!

Very happy to see another update. Looking forward to more John angst. Hope to see another update soon!

cool. ronon punched jermis.=]


wow. this city is one helluva psycho bitch.=] reminds me of fatal attraction.=]


great chapter update soon!=]


the elephants stole my weed.

Thank goodness you've written some more. We're really anxious to see where it all ends, Keep it coming!!

Glad to see an update on this fic. Can't wait for the next chapter to find out what's happening with poor Sheppard! :D

well at least now i know what caused rodney to wake up and ask if it worked cant wait to find out if biro decides to do an autopsy on a live person or not lol :) cant wait for next chapter i will be watching :)

Sweet...Rodney hacked into the system or something.=] Well, that's what i'm guessing.=P



So glad you updated. Can't wait for the next chapter!=]



the elephants stole my weed.

I'm clapping my hands together because you updated! Oh that Jemris, what an ass. Loved how Radek handled him. And pobre Juan. That boy is in a right pickle. Now Rodders did you set that bitch straight?

Woo hoo a new chapter. I thought for sure you weren't going to finish it. LOL!! Loved the chapter and the scene with Radek and the Genii scientist that was really funny. Poor John how long is it going to take for him to recover to go and help the others. I have a feeling if he goes back he may have problems. Looking forward to more. Update soon!

Glad you updated, looking forward to your next chapter.