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| Dr. Addison Montgomery 2006-08-12 ch 1, | abuseWow that was so brilliant! Well done! Poor Danny! |
| lewiscentral 2006-07-06 ch 1, | abuseI liked it |
| K.K.C. 2006-05-29 ch 1, | abuseThat was lovely. Sad, but lovely. I really enjoyed the AUness of it. I suppose this was what it was like if Danny went down the wrong path, eh? ;) The relationship between Aiden and Danny was great, and humourful to boot. Excellent job. Speaking of relationships, I loved the way you portrayed Louie as the helpful older brother. Loves his little counter-part, eh? Heh. The ending? With the rose and that blood? That was surprising, and in some slightly sick way, very romantic. It's the kinda thing I'd want a guy to do for me (call me crazy). It's touching, to say the least. What really added the kick for me was that I could see this happening if Danny decided to follow older bro's footsteps. I didn't have a problem picturing the events. Very well done! I hope to read more from you soon. :D |
| Dybdahl 2006-05-17 ch 1, | abusethe idea of danny never joining the boys in blue, is brilliant (and I might end up stealing it, if you don't mind so terribly much). Love the plot and storyflow, it seems like such a danny thing to do. |
| jayma 2006-05-17 ch 1, | abuseWow, this was really good. The last line was very interesting, I love this whole take of Danny being a Tanglewood boy and how Aiden was always "his girl" haha. Love at the beginning how you said Aiden was never fired and a certain someone is not there, lol. Yeah I can't stand her either, it makes me cringe to see her and Danny together. Evil, lol. Great story over all ^_^ |
| ShadiEyes92 2006-05-16 ch 1, | abuseThat's awsome. Great new take on Danny and Aiden. Loved it. Write more like that please. |