Oh, I like this one - you need to come back to this one. I've always been a relaxed shipper - I'm more of a Sara fan than a GSR/Sandles/Snickers fan. I will admit that lately the GSR side is winning out (sorry, sorry, blame the show). I am a real big D/L fan, so I started reading your D/L fics, and I liked your writing - so a read the whole "Ducks in a Row" series, and it was wonderful. The whole idea of Sara caught between the different men in her life is interesting. OOC for the show, but intriguing for fan fiction. Please update this one soon.

Geez, this story is amazing. Really beautiful writing. It's tragically sad yet amazing at the same time. PLEASE continue.

Great continuation. Definately worth the wait.

I like it so far, keep up the good work. Are Sara and Greg gonna get back together at all?

Touching descriptions and metaphors. For some reason, this is the bit that got to me the most:

Twenty minutes later, he emerged quietly to find Sara had already climbed into bed, no doubt exhausted from the day’s events. The scene laid out before him caused his vision to blur instantly, the sharp burning in his chest bringing tears to his eyes. He had spent the last year trying to erase the image of Sara sleeping peacefully from his mind, and, here it was, staring back at him like nothing had ever changed.

Just tugged at my heart strings, y'know? I just wanted to give him a big hug.

Great job.

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It was worth the wait, i love this story. It gets better every chapter. i also love the comparason of sara's walls and the bricks, i think its beautifl. :)

I loved this one. Sad and beautiful at the same time. Update soon, we need more fics like this one;)

Poor Greg. This just breaks my heart. I feel like crying.

I was wondering where you went! Don't leave again!

I know this is dark and sad, but you're doing it very well. I love your Greg - the maturity of his sorrow is well-described. I like the "in their other life" device. This is really quite excellent.

Yeah - glad to see an update on this story What a sad but awesome chapter. Love the insight into Greg's thoughts - hope to see another update soon -

Hear Hear!

I love the fluff too but sometimes youve gotta mix it in with the angst and I think you took on the challange incredibly well :-D You've TOTALLY got my attention, waiting with anticipation for chapter 4,

Jess x

This was an awesome fic to read before leaving for school. Amazing job, I think its moving along quite nicely.

Why don't I get alerts like this from this evil site anymore? :P

This story is simply wonderful, no matter how long it takes for you to update it remains great.

Am really loving it, even tho Greg and Sara arent technically together :-D

A bit worried as the last update was may and its now september -does that mean ur not gonna finish it?

Jess x

I'd love to read more of this story - I like the dynamic you've set up here, and I love how you write Greg.