Most interesting. I'm also heading straight to that sequel and see how our dear Ardeth fares..

I really enjoyed this and am heading straight for the sequel. I'm intrigued by this white lady and can't wait to find out what's happening next. Bet the O'Connells will be overjoyed to see Ardeth again! ;-)

Interesting...this looks good.

Arrrrggghhh! Don't leve me hanging, where's the sequel?

Wow. This is fascinating, I can't wait to read the rest.

Wow this is great, I really like it. I hope that you do get published if all of your writing is like this.

Absorbing! I'm really looking forward to the sequel.

OMG(once again)I on'y saw about half the movie, but I love this fic anyway! WHY? Why you ask? Because I just drank 2 mugs of coffee and at the moment, I love everything! Especially when I started giggling about the "strong as an ox" line, even though I've heard it said before, it caused me to chortle with convulsions of hysterical laughter, even though this isn't a humor fic, which just shows how crazy coffee can make you! O.o? 49/187

Oh Duchess, you CANNOT leave it there! You're an evil woman...

:-(

Heh, Ardeth is one stubborn man. Naturally he's going to disobey her, right? *grins*

Whoa, this is just incredible. You are an extremely talented writer, and the pacing of this story is superb. The details, the background, everything is perfect. And you wear your research lightly! Thank you *so much* for this, it's got to be one of the best stories I've read - ever. Please continue with the story!

Very intriguing! Please continue!

This looks very good! :) Please continue it soon.

A very interesting beginning! Please continue as this seems to be a very original plot. I love ancient Egyptian mythology.

This is good! Write more please! Are the O'Connells in this because I was just wondering.