I rather liked it.

If only it were longer...The imagery was just right, and no, I couldn't care less about songs in the beginning of stories.

No need to gush about your musical tastes in fanfiction.

I LOVED IT!

Hm, I have no idea what song that was... but interesting chapter, update soon

Ooh, I like! Very eerie. I loved the contrast between the lush, horrifying tone of Ginny's dream and the starkness of the real world when she woke up. At the beginning, I found myself thinking the description of Ginny and the setting and such was a bit much, but then that all made perfect sense when the fact that it was a dream -- and the dream of a pining, ignored adolescent girl, who of course would want that life -- revealed itself. :) (Hee, I should learn to read summaries, eh?) And Tom playing with her and stealing the memory throughout the course of the journal conversation was utterly chilling and just . . . brilliant.

Wonderfully done!

This one-shot was amazing! I absolutely loved it.

Hey, I really liked this!! I love all tom & ginny stories & I wish ppl would write more of them!U did really good imagery but, I don't know the song.Hope u write more~musiclover!