OMG! Now I really cant wait! WOW! U really brought the suspense. hope everything turns out ok within the story (NOTE: OF COURSE IT WILL!) Give you props 4 everything.

Sorry I even doubted you. You have really good imagination and creativity.
Maybe this is why I failed English. Twice.

Oh well, keep up the tremendous work and don't stop. Keep bringing them in! We need people like you to entertain the living daylights out of all of us.

hey you updated!
this was worth the wait, not gonna lie.
it was very well written and i could feel the emotion.
update when you can
:)

i just loved the moment that you had made especially with the jay and theresa saga but i'm really sorry, but your ending sucked. if there is more, then ignore that last bit i wrote.
will jay and theresa ever rekindle their love for each other? if ur still completing the story, you should add something like theresa is hurt badly and jay cant stand to look at his beloved in pain and shes on the verge of dying. and his love for his team, but mostly for theresa, destroys him from working with cronus or something like that.

its your story so i wont interfere but i hope there is more following this story. it made me cry like ive never cried before...until the ending.

WOW! you are an AMAZING story writter!
I am LOVING your story! i just can wait for the end ! please tell me your not going to abandon the story?!
because that would be just awful! you are INCREDIBLE! i wish i could write like you!

Thank you so much for writing this story and please DONT STOP!

Sincerly
Bella :) :P :D

Wow! This is amazing! Can't wait to read what will happen next.
You're a very talented writer. Keep up the good work!

Simply awesome

I'm happy to hear that you finally had some time to write this:) Oh what a horrid mess Jay's gotten himself into... And so the plot thickens eh? Hope to hear from you again soon, and thanks for the thanks!

Wow, that's amazing. So good!
Please update as soon as you can.

omg, wow!! that was really good!! poor herry and theresa :( . theresa kinda reminds me of harry potter in the 5th movie when he's getting the visions of serius black. lol, keep updating!!

I am absolutely thrilled that you updated!!
sorry to hear you had a rough time...if you need help, we're all here to help.
Poor Jay and Theresa...sad!!
update whenever you have time, don't feel any pressure.

Great chapter!! it was so exciting! can't wait for the next so please update soon!

Hey wheres the up date?!

UPDATE!

MORE MORE MORE need more update soon!

Stranded AND Sibling Rivalry sound good...This was a real good chapter as well