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Reviews For: Tangled Webs
Ghostwriter 2007-02-03 . chapter 1
Oh, man. It sounds like what could happen in the next season if it really DOES take place four years in the future. Great job. Catch ya on the flip side.
OTH.daddy'sgurl.06 2006-05-19 . chapter 1
so...I like it alot...don't know if you're still writing but you definately should!
brucasfanatic 2006-05-17 . chapter 1
Hey!! this is really awsome!! :D I just reviewed your other oth story and this one is written just as well!! I really do love the way you're able to capture the characters' feelings. Its awsome. Just some things that would make this better: Don't write both peyton and Lucas's thoughts the exact same way. I know that they're friggen clones of each other and think, act, talk, dress, walk and everything else alike but this chapter had a lot of repetition. Which you should avoid doing. :) also make it longer!! i wanna know how you're going to take this! :D Anyways, its awsome so far!
UD SOON!
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