Ouch...I hope C. Falcon doesn't die. Even though he acts...weird, it would be so very sad to see a main character die.

You can do it, Falcon!

Oh, yeah, good luck with the hext chapter, Hack.

till next time!

-Shining Riku-

Wow. This is a great story. The story of Adam and the Secret Kamek Incident, two mysterys Im waiting for. Keep updating

alex is now dead

Whoa, now THAT was cool.

No wonder why Luigi murdered Gigyas so good.

I'm sorry i didn't review your story any earlier. I've just started reading this story a few days ago.

Anyways, you've done a really good job on this story so far. I'd love to see this keep going!

(One complaint, but please don't think of it as a flame, cause it isn't. The language in the story is a little strong. It kinda seems like you've let up on it a little, and for that i am glad. Please updatre soon!)

Wo Luigi! Rock on, man! Update soon please! (Excellent fight, by the way!)

Well done Luigi! (Applause all around.) A great battle, very hard to imagine how he withstood all of that from a logical stand-point, but taking sheer determination in to account is a great boon, and what a comeback on Luigi's part. Can't wait for the rest.

Now this is a battle. Alex clearly having the upperhand, but Luigi still managing to pull his own surprises, fighting through sheer willpower alone. And what suspense, now that Alex is releasing Ren Kiu, how will Luigi win the battle? Only time will tell.

(Munches through 10 bags of popcorn in anticipation.) Man what a cliffhanger. The rivalries, the suspense. Oh man I've got to go read the next chapter.

NO

MARIO DIED! NO! JUST HOW MANY HAVE TO DIE? (Cries a lot.)

Man, it was a good fight, but it still stinks how Mario had to die like that... why?

Oh gad. I have to say that Luigi seemed screwed multiple times in this fight, but he managed to come back. Alex must DIE!

the last batles...UPDATE ASAP!

Myeterious, cliffhanging, awesome chapter. I was sort of confused as to how Gigyas got beaten so fast by Luigi, though...surely he's tougher than that...but still, GO LUIGI! I'm still getting over the last chapter. Update soon please!

no...

The fights Rawked so to speak. lol

The fights were still nice and descriptive. Though unusually one-sided for your story, that makes it a nice surprise that I enjoy, after all if every fight had them coming out with a win with a disadvantage it'd be repetitive, but there was still plenty of that as well.

And what a cliffhanger, I hope I get to see the next chapter soon.

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