Interesting story. I don't normally go for slash, but this one had such an intriguing story line that I couldn't help myself. I love the characterization of Harry as the older protective brother and of Sasuke as the younger, slightly traumatized but getting over it with Harry's help, brother. Keep up the good work and update soon please. Please just don't write any explicit slash sex...

I really like this story! I mean, the plot is just purely awesome! So update SVP? Please?
I don't really see any problems with the story yet, but I do have a few questions. Is Maya going to re-appear again? For the record, is anyone else from the HP Universe going appear?

Yo.

Pretty good story. Interesting plot and very unique in a way that hasn't been exactly done before. While there are some grammar and word issues, the story is pretty damn good. Hope you update soon.

Ja ne!
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“Just someone experienced in killing immortality seeking snakes.” Was the answer. Not liking the way the fight was going he summoned Manda. The gigantic serpent took one look at the man and the sword he held and then looked at Orochimaru.
“Nothing would make fighting the Galdor Seregon worth it. You’re on your own.” With that the serpent vanished leaving behind a shocked group.

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*hysterical laughter*

Please update soon! I can't wait to read what happens next. ^^

I can see you updated recently. I didn't get the mail in my inbox though. it seems FF;net is broken again.

Oh well. Anyway, I liked what I read, although I would like to request to keep the slash bits to a minimum. I don't really mind reading m/m relations as long as the adult mature details aren't mentioned.

Absolutely brilliant story...I am enjoying learning something about the Japanese culture before Harry and Sasuke went in search of the hidden island of shinobi. I love the battles that Harry, Sasuke and there many new friends have been in. Harry seems to be able to make friends with almost anyone, he has such a commanding aura of both strength and war learnt wisdom in someone as young as him. Whilst he often appears to inexperience warrior/or civilian when necessary he immediately turns into a very seasoned battle-worn experience warrior who's well able to hold up his side in a battle.

Its also great that both Harry and Sasuke are finally showing signs of beginning to heal from both the Riddle war in England and when Sasuke was kidnapped and tortured by Riddles men.

Am truly enjoying this story and the mystery of hidden island that Harry and his younger brother Sasuke are investigating. I'm enjoying the background that you've added into the story about the shinobi and the various villages/countries upon the hidden island. You haven't prepared a map of the island with the various places that Harry and Sasuke have been before arriving at the Cloud village? Must get on and read more!

interesting begining i like it so far anyway congrats on getting 10 reviews. that just shows how good this story is

Hmm...I just love the beginning of this story, which I certainly will keep reading as well. If Harry's 15yrs and Sirius is already dead, how come Harry is living by himself? I thought he'd need a guardian until he came of age, unless he'd be emancipated and become a legal adult despite being still at school? Though I might have missed some of these clues in the first chapter? (Sorry If I did). Will Harry be taking the new little Potter to hogwarts? Can't wait to see if Harry adopts Saskue as his son or younger brother?

Hi *waves* i kittit24 and i realy like this story so please update soon

awesome story lov it the plot line is great keep up the awesome work and plzs update soon

More please? :)

Wow...this is actually a really neat take on a Harry Potter/Naruto crossover. I love it to death too! Please up-date when you can cause I want to read more!

great story, i'll keep my eye out for more chapters