Reviews for Fear in Wolf Clothing

Reviews For: Fear in Wolf Clothing

Kiki75 2008-03-15 ch 1,	abuseGreat, great, great job. The idea of the attack of the wolves and Ennis taking care of Jack is nice (I wrote something similar, in Italian of course, but they're 39 and the situation is completely different: they have a car accident after the "Wish I could leave you" scene... and definitely, the meaning of my story was to give, at the end, another possibility to Ennis), but I really loved your introspection of the charachters. Their thoughts and feelings, in particular Ennis', are really believable... go on like this!
icewolf8 2006-07-01 ch 1,	abuseVery well done. It shows a side of Ennis and Jack not many people would see.
MinnieLover 2006-06-20 ch 1,	abuseWow. You are a REALLY good writer. Seriously. Just...wow. That was a great story. I loved it!
ohiomyown 2006-05-18 ch 1,	abuseThank you, I believe that Ennis did struggle mightily, just as you said, to not feel what he was feeling. I enjoyed your idea of how that day went. Come back from CSI and post us a BBM story anytime you feel like it. For the part that can be improved: there are a couple of sentences with missed words, but not many.
onefreetoroam 2006-05-17 ch 1,	abuseWow, thanks for the great story - wish another chapter would follow. To bad it had to take something bad happening to make Ennis sit up and take notice of his feelings. Thanks again.
w84u 2006-05-17 ch 1,	abuseI think that is an awesome story :) Thank you for writing this and posting it here ;)
kipperoo453 2006-05-17 ch 1,	abuseheya, that was really good and i enjoyed it, it was a nice change from always reading fics about their future lives as you saia, I hope you write some brokeback fiction again I really enjoyed it, thankyou for keeping me occupied for 20 mins!! Amy x (kipperoo453)
Cat Ballou 2006-05-17 ch 1,	abuseWow - that was an amazing story, it goes straight to my heart and I like it very much!! Okay, I have a weakness for a helpless, wounded of sick Jake/Jack g but that's not the only point that I like your story! But the thoughts of Ennis, his care about Jack... that was so beautiful! Thx for sharing! And I would hope you'll write a sequel! Hugs, Cat
Lynn 2006-05-16 ch 1, anon.	abuseFantastic, incredibly compelling story. The interaction you create between Jack and Ennis, the insight into their thoughts, their playfulness, their observations of each other, the protectiveness and falling in love we see with Ennis are so well crafted, Jack's sweetness and vulnerability and beauty (m). Having the 'wolves' coming to get Jack, who defends himself bravely but nonetheless is overpowered by them, with Ennis caring so deeply and rushing to save him, was such a great idea. I could feel this bond between them -- new to them in this beginning of their new love. (sighing happily!). At the end, I was left with wanting so much more of this. There will be more, right? Thanks so much.

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