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| SSidle 2006-06-16 ch 1, | abusecute, different, but cute |
| RandoMaia 2006-05-18 ch 1, | abuse^_^ Me likey. Well written, very IC, and funny!! And, of course, Willow and Xander are awesome. :D (I mean, not as a ship, because W/T is wah better... ehh) Whatever. Write more, though. xD |
| Kerry 2006-05-18 ch 1, anon. | abuseOh that was really cute and light and fun. I loved how you captured each scene, the flow was naturally paced and your dialogue was perfect and very true to character. My favourite line has to be 'Guilt. Guilt was bad. “We can play in the sprinklers after school if you want,” she offered.' The line in itself is quite simplistic but it struck me as being very realistic to the nature and humour of the show, if you know what I mean. Well this is a nice little one-shot all in all, well done and thanks for the enjoyable read xx |