I see where Pidgeot is coming from but when a trainer plans to catch more then six Pokemon they can't use all of them at the same time. He shouldn't have broken his promise though.

Sad sad, more sad...

Here's an extra clip of my Pokémon Cratyl adventutes to cheer you up:

Ria and Ash were walking along the forest path when a mailman suddenly appeared and gave Ria an old newspaper, it read "Young trainer abandons Pokémon!" on the front. Ria slowly turned to look at Ash.

"You little scum bag!" hissed Ria, Ash looked confused.

"What?" asked Ash, still confused. Ria took her bag in one hand and pulled out, a chainsaw.

"I'm gonna turn you into so many little bits, boy!" shouted Ria, she then started chasing Ash round with the chainsaw...

Yay! Ria rules!

Well, usually I'd be a little perturbed at the switch from "him" to "you," but oh well.

I always felt terrible for Pigeot. I mean, it did so much for Ash and he never really appreciated it. It's really frustrating whenever Ash says he'll see a certain Pokémon again, and you think to yourself, "Yeah right. We're never going to see that one again." Poor Pigeot.

Anyway, a moving piece.

its pidgeotto isnt it,answer

You are too talented...

As penance, you must: Go and swallow the first thing you find under the kitchen sink

Now!

Hey! Pidgeot wanted to stay with the flock of Pidgey to protect them from the Fearow.

Though Ash still hasn't gone back for him.

I like Ash, but I was sad that he just left his Pidgeot behind. It never really seemed right to me. Good work on this sad story.

OMG

I luv it... I wonder if MY Pidgeot misses me... :(

I was, well, astounded yeah somehow... FAVE'D

Good point. And i dont like Ash that much either. Good job.

Actually, in the episode where he leaves his Pidgeot, he tells it that the pidgey need it to protect them from the fearow. But a good story otherwise

i feel sorry for Pidgeot. Ash, you should be ashamed of yourself! personally, my fav. character is Lance (Elite 4 champ).

WEEHEE! *Runs in circles* BURP! SQUZE ME!

I was glued to the screen as I read this. Poor Pidgeotto/Pidgeot. BTW, I barely even noticed the switch from "him" to "you"; I was too involved in the narrative itself to notice!

Damn Ash! I saw that episode. My friend always whines that he got Pidgeot and sent her to Ash.

He did abandon Pidgeot. Damn Ash. I REALLY want to see him die.

Well. . . I can't say that I was thrilled that Pidgeot left the team. But he DID want to, and Ash understood that. He probably didn't go back for Pidgeot for one of two reasons. He either 1) got so excited about the Johto league that he forgot or 2) it happened on purpose because Pidgeot would have a significant part in a later episode (though I am yet awaiting the return of Butterfree. . .).

Anyway, this was very good. It was a bit dark, but I liked it! It reminds me of my Noctowl in Silver; I don't use her much anymore because she's at level 65, and the rest of my team are between levels 49 and 56, so I want to level them up more. I always wonder what she's thinking. . . But great job!

Hanni B

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