   happyHB 2006-05-20 . chapter 1cool - but who are barry and helen!?!?!?!?!? |
| elohimdancer319 2006-05-18 . chapter 1 aww... that was sweet! |
| butterflyswest 2006-05-17 . chapter 1 omg this is so good..i loved every min of it ...hope theres more to come |
 Maureen Olivia Lockhart 2006-05-17 . chapter 1Great job! |
 AshCarroll aka ShadowDiva 2006-05-17 . chapter 1Aw! That was sweet. Interesting twist and a different take. Nice job. :) |
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