What a treat! Its exceptionally rare that I find a piece of fan literature about this pairing that is both tasteful and gripping all at once. You've capture the very charm that draws me to this pairing in everything that you describe. Their "romantic" moments (if you must call it that) are wonderful because they are unspoken, untainted by the imitative nature of cheesy Hollywood love lines. You capture with words what--at times--pictures, in their limitations can only leave out.
well done! I applaud you!

hella well done, kept them in character nigh perfectly while still adding the small things they do to each other that mean so much. Awesome!

Good one shot. What I liked the most was your writing ability - the descriptions and the way you worded things. Keep it up.

GD

I'm not sure if I'm trying to cry as it's kinda depressing or flail and fangirl over how your writing rocks my socks...

It was really good, I liked it a lot! You write these two very well!

So good! Love the way you delicately handle the character's emotions, all while keeping them in character. Great job!

Oh wow, this one is definitely good. I liked the interactions between the two.

When I clicked on the link (the story was recced on someone's lj) I was expecting a romance. This is better.

Words escape me. This was beautifully written. You captured the emotion with grace and created an excellent piece that wonderfully fit into the space between those two chapters and explained the resolve that formed there. Going on my favorites! Keep writing!

Excellent characterization. You seem to know just how to capture a brooding Ichigo without making him terribly OOC.

Wow. I'm completely and utterly speechless. That was probably one of the best written stories that I have read to date. Beautiful imagery beyond imagination. I was quite dissapointed to see it end. Bittersweet, and completely and utterly in character. I knew from the first paragraph that I wanted to read it slower and absorb every minute detail of your excellent writing. Exactly what I needed to quell that need for a good ichiruki story. Thank you for the completely awesome glance into the time between the chapters. Wonderfully done!