I've got alot to read, and never played the actual MMORPG (noe any others), but I'm liking this one.

Hey, great story, just wandering if you are going to add more pages to it? And I have to say again that it is great! Hope to read on more!

Chapter 3 now and like the story ver much so far. Its fun to imagine where they are at the moment or following the gobbies travel dicirption. I liked the atmosphere at Windys AH. Nice to imagine how it would be in front of a real Auction House. Will Orinthia find out soon whats behind the fact that people seem to remeber her (or her mother ? I asume)

I've reached chapter 9. I've enjoyed this story so far the only criticism at this point is that I really don't feel connected to Orintha yet, I only saw into her emotions in chapter 1 and I enjoy stories more when I can connect to a character on some emotional level in the beginning. So far she seems to take the background in comparison to her destiny and her mother. I will keep reading though.

The title didn't exactly grab me but your descriptions are beautiful. I've only read the first chapter but I'll continue.

wo~! update :D Nice chapter, looking forward to the rest ^^

Well, I can't say I've come across a lot of FFXI fanfiction that really holds my interests, but I must say, this manages to do that just fine. I'm not too far into it, only a couple of chapters in, but even from there, it has been entertaining. Not groundbreaking stuff, mind you, but not lame, or stupid. That "just-right" area just between the two I suppose you could say.

Anyway, I'll add more as I continue reading, but for the first couple of chapters, on a scale of 1-10, It's a solid 7. Keep in mind, I, in no way, mean anything detrimental to you, or your writing abilities. Your grammar is pretty much dead on, with only a few spots, and you get just a hair bit redundant with character actions, but other than that, it's fine.

Lovin this story so far :) *levels paladin now* I think this story is going great, Orinthia is a great main character idea. My roomate says that theres names mixed up every so often but I havent noticed anything o.O. Looking forward to the rest of it :p hows Chapter 46 coming?

Hey, its been a long time. Sorry it took me so long to get up a review, i've been sorta busy. (I did read the chapters though... just didn't have the time to write up a review)

I loved this chapter^^ Gluttony was my favorite character and this chapter goes deeper into his character and history. Definitely my favorite one yet!

Keep up the great work =D

A nice little side story (Or is it?)... I liked this chapter alot, seeing as it gave us a bit of background on Irasema. Not much else to say, so keep up the good work ^.^ Just one question though: Is Orinthia still unconscious at this point in time, or was she at the fire with them?

P.S. - sorry it took so long to review, something was wrong with my e-mail and so i didnt get any alerts til recently.

nice chapter and well worth the wait. does gluttony have feelings for orinthia or is just that he's not used to caring about someone? keep up the good work, i really wanna read more ^^

oh... cliffhanger. i like it =) it would have been nice if you added a lil diaglogue from gluttony in the chapter, but over all it was very well written. keep it up =)

nice chapter^^ im guessing that was vince talking? i really liked the fight scenes u made. keep it up =)

I've made a forum for asking questions and just making things more visible. It can be found here:

While I am still holding a lot from the reader in implied terms there's a lot still for me to write and I'm sure y'all'd like little bits before then ^^.

nice chapter, im glad you updated^^ im a little confused tho... who was isaak talking to? and when was this, past or future?