Reviews for Young Ones wOoT

Reviews For: Young Ones wOoT

RattyRayvn 2006-10-08 ch 10,	abuseHehe, the candy hearts from chapter 9 were hilarious. “Heh, don’t want to kill everyone!” (But we all know he does...) Yeah, I finally got around to reading the rest of this :D And I loved that last line: “At the end of the day, Neil… It was alright.” I could just imagine Vyv's face as he said that...oh yes, and the unsolved mystery of how to clean up in three seconds, great Young Ones moment.
The Happy Monkey of Doom 2006-09-17 ch 10,	abuseAh wow! So much to say! I won't say it all, because I'd just be mentioning every little detail of the past eight chapters individually and how much I loved them. So I'll just say this: It couldn't have had a better ending. Oh, and I LOVE YOU!!
The Happy Monkey of Doom 2006-09-15 ch 2,	abuse'“Hey, Neil? What’s fer breakfast?” he asked casually even though he was upside-down, against the wall with his legs dangling in front of him.' that's a really funny image! much mindless violence in this chapter - i like.
The Happy Monkey of Doom 2006-09-15 ch 1,	abuseyay! i love your stories. the fish is so weird. and the relationship between spg and vyvyan is so cute. i love it. i'm faving this and i'm faving you.
Radar-rox 2006-08-30 ch 10,	abusei know i could've done it all in the last review, but its so great that you deserve 2! yay the 'v' sign is the only way to salute a flag! hahah elderly pedestirans are soft and absorbant.. not that i'd know (tries to look innocent) ah, the convenieces of being and author and not having to explain unexplainable cleanliness! aww that was sweet! no, it cant be over! i forbid it! i need more! moremoremore! absolutely fantastic, great ending to a brilliant story, you should be very proud. well done! x PS - write more soon!
Radar-rox 2006-08-30 ch 9,	abuseyay new chapter! something for me to read when i should be doing psychology! yay! hhmm, dead rat supper eh? practical and efficient! hahaha, i love casual vyv... like in boring when he's eaten the telly and the tv guy comes and vyv just waves... the 'he had science to do!' sounds scarily enthused and dedicated for vyv... i hate science stools. who the hell designed those? have they been shot yet? where's my gun...? ha it woulda been interseting if his injury actually made vyv function better. haha reminds me off 'sick' - 'feel better you bastard!' hehe i can just hear him saying 'oh dear' in my head.. weird.. ooh, those eyebrows of interest are not just confined to you m'dear! (wink) candy hearts: that most deadly of foes. 'nuff said. hands over eyes oh my god.. the whole bottle?! HAHAHAAHAHA absol-smegging-lutely brilliant! much yayness! i want vyv as a teacher.. sigh, it could never be... wonderful, well done!
Nisa Tunesque 2006-08-23 ch 8,	abuseWell what can I say? This story is stupid, puerile, childish and totally unrealistic... it RULES! In other words, good work! Keep it going!
Radar-rox 2006-08-11 ch 8,	abuseooh yes vyy, way to command that respect! boar moppers? what? you crazy crazy gal... 'he needed some raw tea' HAHAHA brilliant! hahaha i just had to cover my mouth cuz i was laughing so loudly at the 'playing dead' thing... how long is this second break? vyv's just got bitten by an ant, puked on by a kid, cleaned up by a nurse and he STILL has time to go into the staf room? sounds like my sorta school... hehe i cant really imagine vyv breaking down in tears.. oh, except that he did in Summer Holiday.. anyway.. science with SPG and vyv! rocking! 8 herons is something to be reckoned with.. we used to get one coming to our pond and trying ot eat the fish, so we kept shooing it off, but it turns out we had almost 200 so we need'nt really have worried. aw, i wanna go on a canal boat. jsut read this review back and it sounds crazy (as always) becasue i've been reviewing as i read (again, as always). but hey, if nothing else, it should make for interesting reading! great chapter, cant wait for the next, well done!
Radar-rox 2006-07-10 ch 7,	abuseYAY SPG! aah he's brilliant, loved hearing about his adventure missions. ah poor imprisoned moth.. the two kids at the start sound like they just stepped out of Grange Hill... well, for a rushed effort i thought it was very good! well done!
Radar-rox 2006-07-03 ch 6,	abuseaah that was brilliant! go anarchy! i loved the bit when vyv smashed through the wall, very realisitic, and his disregard for safety. which i totally agree with, fire drills are stupid, if there really was a fire theres no way a bunch of school kids are gonna remain calm and proceed quietly... well i seem to have wandered off the point somewhat... no harm done... well done, cant wait for the next. x
Radar-rox 2006-06-25 ch 5,	abuseyay you updated! thats weird, i was only thinking about this fic last night... i would have liked to see vyv try his hand at some shakespeare... maybe macbeth or hamlet... hehe we have astroturf at our school, though its more like a beach... sand bloody everywhere... sorry to hear about your poor misfortunate pet rock... ben turner eh? o-hoo-oh! hehe. like to see vyv accidentaly sabotage that! ooh, check out vyv and his responsibleness! yay make vyv cause chaos in the dt room! make a human-sized catapult to use on rick or something! you know you wanna! well done, cant wait for the next chapter! x
RattyRayvn 2006-06-16 ch 4,	abuseHeheh, Vyv the drama teacher - I'm afraid already... Looking very much forward to the next instalment of this hilariously random and randomly hilarious fic!
Radar-rox 2006-06-16 ch 4,	abuseyay you updated! check you out and your fancy-pants georgraphy. i remember geography.. nostaligic face well, actually, i dont reality face we never learnt anything, just passed notes the whole time. good times. what is this thing you have going on with stuart? ring-tailed lemur yay. my friend got bitten by one of them at the zoo once, shes hated them ever since. i like them - they have jazzy tails. hahaha tooth fairy lol oh god, drama. hehe. i completely ant utterly cant wait. well done! wait, what are you doing, reading my crappy review nonsense? get writing girl!
Radar-rox 2006-06-08 ch 3,	abuseyay you updated! hehe tis good, i was laughing to myself when it said about the kids wanting to scare vyv, all i could think was 'i'd like to see you try!' can't wait until the next chapter to see what madness may ensue, one thing though, you might wanna proof-read before you print. no biggie, just that a couple of words were a letter or so off... other than that, totally rocking, looking forward to the next chapter with much egarness! well done! x
Radar-rox 2006-05-19 ch 2,	abuseaw cool, too many funny things to mention, plus i gotta hurry becasue 'have i got news for you' is on... totally great, can't wait for the next chapter, well done!

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