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| Mar-Mar21 2008-03-02 ch 5,  | abuseYou must wrote more soon! I really like this and I want to see where is't headed! |
| Mar-Mar21 2008-03-02 ch 2, | abuseVery interesting meeting. Iroh is such a good man. |
| Lady Farevay 2007-02-01 ch 5, | abuseAh! No! Don't leave it there! I'm hanging off the edge with anticipation. Just so you know. *Mega watt grin* Lady F |
| MormonMaiden 2006-12-25 ch 5, | abuseYay!! Zuko's not heartless and OOC!! I look forward to more of this! |
| Jimmy the Gothic Egg 2006-06-05 ch 5, | abuseThis is good. Have you considered updating? |
| Junsui Chikyuu 2006-06-02 ch 5, | abuseOh wow, this is interesting. Can't wait to see more. |
| Outsane 2006-05-18 ch 5, | abuseHmm. Interesting. I like, so update soon, mmkay? ^_^ |
| kayko15 2006-05-18 ch 5, | abusePoor Aang. Currently I just want to take him in my arms and hold him like a plushie! Zuko: you're insane Kayko. Me: Yeah but you've gotta feel sorry for the boy. Zuko: Sure. ME: Anyway, great chapter. I loved it. I can't wait for another chapter. Later. K15 |
| Lionessmon 2006-05-18 ch 5, | abuseGreat chapter, well done, post soon |
| AlleluiaElizabeth 2006-05-18 ch 5, | abuseO! I like this thing a lot. Please continue! |
| Blonde-Existentialist 2006-05-17 ch 4, | abuseAy, I think I misrepresnted myself in the last review, so backtracking to fix it. When I say Avatar form, I mean not in the sense of a bender, but with the spiritual depth and maturity he has from having an "old soul". Or my interp, you've seen the character before on the show, the inordiant amount of level-headedness and maturity for his personaltiy, althoug I agree with what you said about naive optimism. He really does believe and trust in Zuko deep down, far more than is good. Same with Iroh in truth, which was another thing I didn't mention. We always see sappy soft sweet Iroh, but as what he clearly stated in chpt 3, he is loyal to Zuko and Fire Nation, but he is also good and kind person, secondary though. What really comes out well as well is the age differnce between Zuko and Aang. |
| me-obviously 2006-05-17 ch 5, | abuseInteresting and original story. I've never seen its like before. I like it quite a lot (now if only the chapters were longer). Update soon, please. |
| La Moirae 2006-05-17 ch 5, | abuseGreat story. You're in fine form as always, Rashaka. I'm definitely looking forward to seeing more of this. La Moirae P.S.-When are you ever going to update "Culture Clash"? I really would like to see some more of that. Of course, I'm not really one to talk about late updating. |
| Azamiko 2006-05-17 ch 5, | abuseI like their interaction... |
| Crys 2006-05-17 ch 5, anon. | abuseI love how you always thread your stories with something ethereal. This makes them speak, and I appreciate your writing very much. |