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| JJ Rust 2008-01-04 ch 1, | abuseFunny story. I thought you captured the girls obsessiveness perfectly. The Katherine flipping the hair thing was priceless. I never realized she did that until I read it, then I thought back and said, "Man, she does do that." I did notice some missing words and other grammatical mistakes, and didn't get some of the crazed fan acronyms until I got further into the story. But I believe you said you wrote this on the fly. Still pretty enjoyable story. |
| causeofCSI 2006-08-13 ch 1, | abusei can just see the faces of the night shift team as all those girls run in and atack them with their questions and lectures! do add another chapter! |
| l0v3l1k3w1nt3r 2006-07-07 ch 1, | abusewow... deja vu... lol joke! very funneh!! |
| alleycatabra 2006-07-06 ch 1, | abuseWhat are you on and... can i have some? Okies that was funny and weird at the same time but you forgot to add gilnick/nickgreg/greggil/and nickgreggil obsessives in there, just to see their eyes bug out at the thought. Good writing btw:) |
| ThisGoesOutToYou 2006-05-24 ch 1, | abusei really REALLY liked this. so funny. |
| Yellowierd0 2006-05-20 ch 1, | abusewhat the hel. that was err umm... interesting and... weird and funny.i don't get what the hell you mean by the ship thing but something tells me i don't want to. most of it was confusing but that's expected from me. oh well (btw you do realise who this is right? of course you do) |
| novafan 2006-05-19 ch 1, | abuseTruely hilarious! and dead on as far as the obsessed fan writers and their ships. |
| paganmelly 2006-05-18 ch 1, | abuseHAHAHAHAHA! That was so funny. I'm a shipper and I thought it was great!! Melly )O( |
| Veronica10 2006-05-18 ch 1, | abuseThis was hysterical and just the laugh I really needed today. BRAVO |
| .candleburn. 2006-05-17 ch 1, | abuselol, that was amazing. *dies laughing* |
| dArkliTe-sPirit 2006-05-17 ch 1, | abuse...(falls out of chair laughing) |