Wow... to be honest, I haven't read that Goosebumps story in YEARS, but I do recall some of it; and I even remember that when reading it, I became scared stiff to go to sleep in fear that zombies will come get me!

Interesting plot you got there, when you take a Goosebumps story like that and change it into a fanfic.. Very cool there. It leaves you feeling a bit unerved (which is kinda the whole point there, isn't it?) Anyways, the ending of it, eww... I would shoot myself before I would watch myself be eaten by zombies!

To bad noone would of believed 'me' about the whole zombie in the water thing. I would of asked for a gun and ammo if they did!

Good one-shot there!

good story! keep up the good work! since i checked out ur story, can u plz check out mine?