Reviews for Outside The Lines

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Morgan5318 2007-11-12 ch 1,	abuseI am quickly becoming a fan of your writing, Jas. This has a great deal of potential, and I'd love to see what more you'll do with it. I've often wondered about Jayne's family; I kind of thought he'd have lots of siblings, and that's one reason he stays gone a lot. :) But, you have a good handle on Jayne's speech patterns and his I think you get into our favorite mercenary's head just fine. Please keep writing.
Morwen Tindomerel 2007-11-03 ch 5,	abuseThis boat is filling up with crazy lil' sisters. Oh well, they'll be company for each other. ;D
garden-crafter 2007-09-26 ch 10,	abusePlease write more !
Scifi-warper 2006-07-28 ch 10,	abuseI like it! Love seeing Jayne's softer side. I hope Maddie makes it through alright. Please let her make it through alright!
Transgenic-girl 2006-07-18 ch 10,	abuseThat was so sweet! I don't have a big brother so I don't have anything to compare it to, but it was sweet how protective Jayne is of his sister. Then again when Kaylee was shot he was ready to tear the guy to pieces, he's a softie at heart.
Scifi-warper 2006-07-16 ch 9,	abuseGah, again! This day just gets worse and worse for the Cobb siblings and River doesn't it? Geeze, can anyone in the 'verse give them a break. Mal better hurry up and find them or else. P.S. Love River's comparison of the Jayne and Maddie's mind. Both similar and yet both totally different. P.S.S. Update this soon! I'm on the edge of my seat here!
Scifi-warper 2006-07-16 ch 8,	abuseGAH! I don't like that ending. That's a bad ending. And River's uh, babble only made it worse. Well, at least Brady's gone, and I'm really not crying about that. I just hope Jayne will be alright.
Scifi-warper 2006-07-16 ch 7,	abuseNothing like a pair of crazy teenage girls to convince the crew to get their butts moving. Loved River's ending to the note. I hope Jayne's okay, and I hope that Brady guy does not come across River or Maddie. But mostly River, cause she can kill people...with her brain.
Scifi-warper 2006-07-16 ch 6,	abuseWow. Remind me never to cross that girl in a dark alley. Yep, she's definitely Jayne's sister alright. So, the creepy guy has a name. That just makes it worse. Wonder what he's gonna do to Jayne. Maddie, darlin, you better hurry up. Maybe you should take River with you. Could come in handy.
Scifi-warper 2006-07-16 ch 5,	abuseSomehow I think the master knife wielder is better for Maddie. Another thing she and River can share. Oh boy. I'm not liking this creepy guy. He's not a good person...okay, that was kinda pathetic, but you get what I mean. Wonder what he has out for the Cobb siblings.
Scifi-warper 2006-07-16 ch 4,	abuseYes, the two youngest are becoming friends. Of course, in that case, I'm betting Mal, Jayne, and Simon are all three in for a world of trouble. And if Jayne did teach Maddie how to fight...(shivers) The combination of those two.
Scifi-warper 2006-07-16 ch 3,	abuseOh no! That's all I can say. Oh no. This just gets better and better. Now we have some people after the second pair of siblings aboard Serenity. Am I the only one noticing the pattern here?
Scifi-warper 2006-07-16 ch 2,	abuseLOL. Well, at least the siblings are somewhat consistent on things they don't like. I'm still liking Maddie. Though, I'm betting she and River are gonna get along better then say, River and Jayne. This is gonna get pretty interesting.
Scifi-warper 2006-07-16 ch 1,	abuseI like Maddie. Though I get the feeling she's going to be a wrench in Jayne's personality. Which is really not a comforting thought once you think about that.
debbieja 2006-07-16 ch 9,	abuseI like River's explanation for why she feels a connection to maddie. That her mind is uncomplicated. Poor Jayne, he really has no head for strategies does he. I'm hoping River can find a way to keep them safe until the others arrive to help Debbie

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