Excellent writing style. I thought that the overall story was pretty good. Maybe describe more of the setting next time so it's easier to understand what's happening.

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I thought your excellent writing ability could have been put to use on a longer story, though! But there's still Florence- I hope!

I read your story, and I'm sorry no one reviewed it for you! It was entertaining, however, a lot of it didn't really feel like it was true to character, especially as far as Shaun is concerned. He just didn't seem the same as in the movie. His attitude seemed different.

Haha! Well Good =] Love It! =] And Don't Worry, I Write And Barely Anyone Reviews =]

I think you got the characters down really well! Good work! Keep it up! :D

this was a hilarious story! thanks fr postin!

Wish you could have made this longer but I understand how hard it is to update when it seems like no one is really reading it. Very good though, I enjoyed it. Of course I honestly thought you made it a little too serious. That could have been your intention. Anywho, very good.

Quite good! I enjoyed it alot - though I was hoping the story would continue . . guess I didn't want it to end.

Keep writing . . Can't get enough of Shaun!:)

- immerv2

I thought your story was bloody brilliant.

Then you shall have feedback: it rocked. I think it should have included the frase: "and have a cup of tea 'till this whole thing blows over!"

heyy i randomly found this, its pretty good eh!! Like it alot!

This really was quite wonderful, I certainly enjoyed reading it!

this is pretty good at the mo. x x

thats pretty cool, seein as shaun of the dead is ma favourite film!

Ok Although its too late I feel bad and so I'm Reviewing, I like this story, I look forward to reading anything else you write in the future