I loved that! It was so funny, and so cute! I love how you made them write letters that they crumpled because they didn't like them!! I especially love that line 'Then you could show me what India is really like...'!! Ah, I love that!! Keep up the writing!! =D

Ah!I love it.

Nice work! Good character portrayal!

good ok im going to try and do something that doesnt envalve a computer... it didnt work oh will on to the next fan fic

hay in the last rewrite you spelled fine fune. just though u shoud know kis kis

wouldn't it be nice if like u wrote letter kartik sent and then Gemma's reaction in thoughts instead of what she would write back. but i love them. lol. they get so off topic.

Yay! It's quite funny! I don't know if that's what Kartik would really think, but hey, it's creative!

I like it very much, and I think Gemma and Kartik were both very in character.

I loved it!
I thought it was hilarious... I'm not sure if it was supposed to be or not, but imagining Kartik trying to write Gemma a letter and then sighing and crumpling it... it was pretty funny for me, but I find everything funny so, there you go...
great work!

nice job!

Months after I read my first AGATB fanfic, I have finally found time to start actually reading the great book.

As for your one-shot, I find it intersting. It made me smile. The complexities of writing "love notes".

I wish he wouln't be so formal, loosen up a bit and not be so tense.

And the ending letter. Short and to the point.

Very good job.
I just finished Rebel Angels (as in a few minutes ago) and this has not made me any less frustrated. Bad news for me as I am about ready to start pulling my hair out but great news for you as it shows just how well you've captured the characters.

This is so clever. Considering this is one of my all time favorite AGaTB stories, I was thrilled when I saw that it actually got updated (it was a surprise, as I thought this was just a one shot).

I love how Gemma gets all carried away with herself when she writes to Kartik. It's very in character. Although, Kartik is far more fun to read, because he's more a mystery. (not to say that Gemma isn't great too though). ;)

I'm putting this on my alerts, just to see that if by any miracle you decide to add another sure-to-be-amazing chapter.

That was SO creative! I am not only impressed by the writing (the last draft mirrors Kartik's style perfectly) but the cleverness in thinking the multiple drafts up? I'm jealous. Good work!

awesome letter..it was sweet and it was perfectly written.