Interesting.You're a good author alright.Akari wasn't kidding when she said that you had talent.Hope to see more chappies soon.But when we were in the chat room wasn't it suppossed to be a x-files ficcie?Oh well.Good luck with you elvish mellonim.Did I spell that right?

i love war of ages! it is my fav book EVER (so what if my opinion is just SLIGHTLY biast) it is still the best book EVER...oh yah...befor i forget...I WANT MORE! lol i should stop yelling.. more war of ages please

awesome. it's been a while i haven't seen an "FPS" fic ;) this stuff iz good, you can keep writing ))) plzzz...

I lik3 it! Really great work here... I'm a fan of the first person POV, and I must say, you do the perspective very well!

More, more, more! This is a wonderful story so far, I hope you intend on adding more to it! I really enjoy the perspective you're writing the story from, it really draws you in. _ Kepp it up!