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| Just some person 2006-05-19 ch 1, | abuseGreat chapter, really good! It potrayed their relationship exactly, even though it was only one day! Great job! ~Rachelle |
| Em-958 2006-05-19 ch 1, | abuseWonderful story! You made my crappy day a whole lot better, Thanks! I really like this story. I love that episode too! I think that their unspoken love should have been taken further in the episode and I'm glad you decided to do it yourself! I think it's a horrific and beautiful episode, absolutely one of the best. Even though there A LOT good ones lol. Though the story was sad it was beautiful. I love the way you use your words and play up their emotions. It's a great feel to the story and you really have gotten the characters, again. As always, that's one fo your trademarks! It's devastating to know that they can't be togther and that the more they try to ignore their feelings, the more hurt they get. You would think that their situation would be simple, like : "Hey! Syd's back! I'm going to dump my wife and get back with Sydney again!" In real life, that's not that easy and after these consequences, not at all that easy, if not impossible. You really show that with this tory wich I think is great. Just although a great and really appreciated story! I love oneparters! Mostly they are long enough to keep my interest, but your stories tend to keep my interest way longer than a chapter! lol Great work! I hope you're all good! See you around! //Emma |
| Vanessa 2006-05-18 ch 1, anon. | abuseGreat start! |
| danielle 2006-05-18 ch 1, anon. | abuseomg u wrote this story so well. it was so interesting. u should definatly keep going with it ! |
| vaughnfan 2006-05-18 ch 1, | abuseOh my gosh! It's so sad :( I loved it though :) I must agree with you, that episode is one of best. Great work mate! Keep it up |