Interesting. It took a couple of reads before I really took it all in (too much work!) but Neville and Peter is a pretty intriguing parallel. Nice one!

(On a side note, I also LOVE that song by Trip Cyclone!)

oooh, that was so sad! What a wonderful story. I've always had a soft spot for Neville, and even Peter is starting to grow on me, especially now that I've read this. I finally managed to find your site again, and I was so happy to see my name up there! Let me know if you'd like to use any more of my stories, I'd be more than happy to help! Thanx, see ya

Wow...i mean...wow...how did u come up with that one? What a cool fic...love it love it love it!

Huh, what an interesting parallel! Neville and Peter . . . it seems to obvious now, but . . . great story! I really liked it!

*raises eyebrows at flame* Er, is it just me or was that fic not supposed to have much of a plot? It's just a little window of Neville and Peter's minds at graduation... Well, anyway, *I* liked it. Makes me wonder if Neville has any real friends at all. Though if he turns the way Peter did, I'll stop feeling sympathetic for him at all. Hmm... I think I'm going off to read your slash fics now. ;)

ooh i had never really asscotiated peter and neville, it could all turn out the same all over again! i see it now... james and lily (or harry and ginny) along with ron and hermione and then neville is just outside their little group...who knows what will happen?

*sob sob* I luv Neville. I don't like the way the people act about him, and I loved the way your fic showed that... congrats

This is soooooo sad! OMG. I can't even think of anything to defend Harry&Co, because it's pretty much on canon! Good job!

Wasn't going to review . . . this story disturbed me to a great extent, because it reminded me of the hopelessness I so often feel. Would anyone care if I was gone? Would they notice? . . . I just felt the same way Neville did, when we were taking pictures as the seniors graduated. I wasn't in even one. I loved this. You can capture loneliness so well with words. I love your work.

Did you write the lyrics to the words in bold or is it a real song? That was nice...especially the Wormtail POV...write more? I really loved your story.

Ohh, this makes it seem like Peter even had it better then Neville. He got some farewell gifts from his friends after all. Nobody cares about Neville. I know how he feels. Does Peter at least realise that he did mean something to his friends? And he betraied them. I hope Neville doesn't go the same way.

I liked this very much. Please write more fics!