This is, quite possibly, the most interesting crossover I've seen for this game, aside from the Sonic the Hedgehog/PE crossover. And, oddly enough, it worked!

You really captured the character's personalities. My only complaint is the lack of information as to how the commandos happened to go from their universe to this one.

Now that I think about it, wouldn't they be traveling into the future as well? (A long time ago, in a galaxy far, far away...)

Anyways, this is a great example of the extremities of Fan Fiction, and how even the most out-there ideas can work. Great work on this, and keep up the good work.

Hey ho! This is nice... who are those guys anyway? NMCs actions next chapter? I can't wait...

This is intersting.

Update soon.