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| Calliope Foster 2006-09-25 ch 1,  | abuseThe ending was beautiful, I was near to tears. You freaking talented girl you, what an awesome story! |
| apenamee 2006-05-22 ch 1, anon. | abuseSo different from some of your other stories, and full of depth (not that the other ones aren't). Another good job. You may want to clean it up a bit. |
| Doppleganger33 2006-05-18 ch 1, | abuseSo this is how the New Olympians came to have the New Olympian gargoyles. Very sad story indeed. You know? It kind of reminded me of the "Diary of Anne Frank". Ever read that? Very somber in the way you see the life of the family there living in hiding from the Nazis but you just know that they will be found and sent to the gas chambers. There was another WWII story I read bases on a woman who LIVED in a labor camp and survived. I must find out the name to that, twas quite powerful. The story itself was great. You just got to watch out for small errors here and there. A beta-reader or even giving your story a once over yourself will get rid of most of those. The word "gargess" I'm not sure if you know but it's not really a word. A better word would be "gargoyle" because a female is really still a gargoyle. |
| theshadowcat 2006-05-18 ch 1, | abuseVery sad, but very well done. Thanks for writing. |