Poor Hisoka...but that ending was pricelessX3 Or rather the part just /right/ before the end

Love it!

This story'd fit really nicely into the manga/anime. :D Yay!

Well done.

I loved this one so much! Everyone was IC, and that is awesome.

Aw!

That was really good!

:)

Yay, this is really good!

And luckily I've been able to read Yami no Matsuei up to that part.

(I finished the third volume a couple days ago)

so I know what you are talking about -smile-)

Indeed it would be rather terrible if Muraki had been able to get his reward for winning...

It seems a very decent for bothe Tsuzuki who would have to give his body (horrible idea)

and to Hisoka who would know his partner to be sharing the same bed as his 'former' rapist...

Anyway, it was very good written

(did you say this was your first story of this series? because I wouldn't be able to tell)

Greets, Lhune

XD Gushoshin and the lecture on safe sex... that would be... So interesting.

"Interesting" being "funny and more than a little wierd" XDD

Loved Hisoka's angry outburst though-I never thought of that! O: Hisoka probably /would/ be pissed at Tsuzuki for doing that. Damn. I wish I would think of these things T_T

I like this idea and I'm surprised there aren't more fics that explore this bizarre scene. You would think that Hisoka would be BEYOND pissed. Thank you for writing this. Good Job!

UWA! SO CUTE! and so sad... BUT MOSTLY AWESOME!

This was nice. ;) Good characterization and dialogue. This part of the story needed to be fleshed out - you've created a great scene.

Oh, this is simply fabulous. I love stories like this, where we realize that there are some memories that keep coming back to the characters, some scars that won't completely heal. And the two of them are delightfully in-character! I love it. Definitely a favorite. I look forward to more YnM fanfiction from you in the future. :)

Brilliant! Hisoka's calmness has always bothered me, too, and this scene would have been perfect had the anime staff had enough money to do it. It was very IC and cute, and the last bit with Gushoshin made me giggle. Great first attempt!

cute! nothing disgusting, either. thanks for the wonderful fanfic!

That's god! I loved it so much! Are you going to do more chapters! I hope so! That was great! GOSH! I just can't explain to you how much I loved it! Gah! *is going insane over Tsuzuki x Hisoka pairing*

That was so cute! great story and job!

*sniff* It's sweet. It was really good! Tsuzuki has a funny imagination...HEHE. Anyway, great story!

JA NE!

EH