NICE

wah!!just started reading yesterday...just finished now...darn this is long!of course im not complaining...please update soon...yes, I have self- restraint problems...

wow really cool update soon!!^^

a) How old are everyone now?
b) Just to point out something, not spamming in anyway:

Naruto was born 10th of October

Sasuke was born 23rd of July (thus he is about three months older than Naruto)

Itachi was born 9th of June and he is 5 years older than Sasuke. If Itachi killed the clan when he was 13 Sasuke would have been 8-years-old. Thus Itachi would have been 5 years old when the Kyuubi attacked. Not much is known about Itachi's childhood except that when he was only 4 Itachi had already witnessed countless lives lost due to war, which emotionally traumatized and affected his demeanor. It is also known that he graduated from the ninja academy after only one year. At age 7 he graduated from the Academy and mastered the Sharingan at age 8, passing the Chunin exam at age 10 and becoming ANBU Captain at age 13 (When he became an ANBU he was promoted as Jounin at the same time). According to Madara, Itachi also had a lover, whom he killed during the Uchiha clan massacre. (I SINCERELY HOPE ITACHI WON'T KILL THE CLAN THIS TIME!)

c) I'm sure you know this now but didn't know it back then so there's no need to really change this but:

The Yondaime: Namikaze Minato "Konoha's Yellow Flash".
Yondaime's Wife: Uzumaki Kushina "The Red Death Of Whirlpool".
Naruto's Godfather: Jiraiya.

d) What happened with Kyuubi? Shouldn't it get free? What about the new Kyuubi attack?

e) I ABSOLUTELY LOVE TRHIS STORY! UPDATE ASAP!

f) AND REMEMBER; I'M NOT SPAMMING!! NO GETTING MAD AT ME!! *pout*

I would love to continue reading your story, but I just couldn't stand the name given to the yondaime. I hated when I encounter a minato/naruto time travel story that I began to like and then his name turn out to be arashi. Ugh! It's me, not you. I love the way you write and the plot line. I just couldn't stand the name arashi.

im so happy that Rin is pregnant!

awesome story i cant wait till you update

what bout 'Bloody Fox' for Naruto and for Rin...i don't know.
Great chappy.

Hmm i think i have a few ideas were this might be going.

Amusing.

You didn't explain the area very well in this chapter. You usually manage to paint up the picture as you go, but this time you didn't. I just wanted to point out that if there is a blade stuck far enough in you that you have to jank it out yourself, then it is much better to leave it. You'll die from bloodloss otherwise. Meaning Ning must have some sort of bloodline or something, because he should've been dead long before he had time to finish off his second opponent. I went through his ribs, there is a very large probability that his lunge (damn it! forgot how to spell the f*cking word and I'm pretty sure what I wrote is very wrong) was pierced. Also, even if the Iwa that Itachi fought had janked out the kunai his arm wouldn't have been much use anyway. Perhaps he would've last a few more seconds.

It is "genin", not "gennin" or "genning" (at least I think "genning" is supposed to be genin). ge- chu(chuu?)- jo(jou?)- nin. I'm not really sure about chunin and jonin when I think about it. Really entertaining.

With the Sharingan one can cast almost unrivaled Genjutsu if there is eye contact. One can see through techniques, both Nin- and Genjutsu, and easily copy them if one sees them performs. One also sees a few seconds into the future, or rather the movements of people before they perform them. Calling the Sharingan useless is like calling an atom bomb harmless. I will admit that both are mostly useless when practicing, but outside of that.. It was quite some time since I last read this story. I think I left off at this chapter, I recognised most of this.

Kakashi made the Chidori before obito died but Minato (aka the Fourth Hokage) forbade him to use it cuz it caused tunnel vision. the sharingan fixed that little matter real quick though.

ok, you so got that building scene from Blade 3