Love it!
So IC!

What I particularly love about this piece is how Sesshoumaru--the ever-so-powerful and ever-so-clever Lord of the West--is so slow to "get it" when it comes to things like this, things like what Rin is to him, what he feels about Inuyasha, how his rejection of and resistance to certain ideas reflects on his opinion of himself and his purpose, on who he is.

This is the kind of "from inside his mind" quality that I think most appropriate for writings about Lord Fluffy, and I found it's beauty serene and haunting.

sorry, but i dont understand. what did Rin's question have to do with merely seeing Inuyasha? Good story, good idea. try continuing

i want the next chapter! the first one was a little weird...but whose isn't? i like this story so far.

actually I get what you're saying and agree.
I got the story idea and I think it was a great concept of thought. ^ ^ And It works with how Sesshomaru acts. Very good idea, and the one-shot expressed it.

Very good! I like your story a lot! It touches the heart and warms the soul! ^.^ However cheesy that sounded, it's true. I like how it shows Sesshomaru has changed (even if it's just a little) with Rin's entering in his life. *sniff* Very cute!

-DM

;-; that's so sweet. I haven't seen too many decent IY fictions so...I'll be watching for more. Thanks!