That was interesting and original :)

very good story...immensely creative

Interesting.

I love the 20 stories fics!

A great, entertaining and touching story about the man who founded Konoha. Yet another fine example of your seemingly effortless storytelling skills.

now that was cool. Really, really cool.

cool

And that's all he needed to be to rule the village. Good story...different

Isn't that the truth. I appluad your creativity of both verisons of the First's history

Good Job

Pretety good. I hope you can make funnier ones of these.

These are very interesting...

Excellent chapter.

Good luck & best wishes,

Hououza

I like this. Very interesting.