lol, My eyes skipped down to the one line of dialogue and I was like "WTF?" Actually, I said that outloud. Well, not the acronym. Anyway, I still read it and I still think you're a fantastic writer :)

Just found your work and read this...wow! Just heart breaking, but i would LOVE to see a follow-up to see. Sara's reaction after-or the next day.
Hope you continue writing, you have talent for it.

karagrace

It was so good...but...yes...book in the head for you! Heather! Gah... =)

*pelting you with books; pelting you with encyclopedias; pelting you with my local library*
nah, well, the story made me mad/sad, but i can't get angry at someone for exercising their creativity. devastatingly good. well written...
it's like... Sara's worst nightmare!

good job, despite the bad theme lol

i can just see this happening after tonights epp of CSI, that's not to say i'm enjoying the prospect.

I won't throw anything at you, I loved it!

O man! I'd hate you but the Author's note at the end had me laughing too hard. I can't. All I can say is bravo!

this was well written.

ok, this was awesome. i loved it. i have no doubt that gris can be a world class jackass. it was nice to see.

bravo! thanks for sharing.

Agh! How very evil of you to write such a thing! As much as I would love for you to write a sequel so G/S can work things out, as you said in the fic, "There were no words that could take the sting out of his verbal faux pas." Damn straight. I think you should write MORE a**hole Grissom fics, the meanie in me enjoyed this a lot! :-D

oh gris is SUCH a PRAT! I eman in this fic! I real life he's...well, lets no get into that...:) Great fic, but the twist kinda kills you! loved it all the same!

Loved it. I'd love to see a sequel - next day at the lab. Maybe a confrontation between Sara and Lady Heather. Better yet both.

First, are there going to be other chapters? Second, I'm learing about Traditional Chinese Medicine and how everything has a balence. There has to be a story like this for the many "happy ever after" bits. Too much good can end up being bad. Great story...keep it up!

Good Luck!
Katie >^..^

damn you! very annoying and very good. and of course you wont let us throw anything. *pouts*

i liked it. it was different from all the other wishy-washy GSR out there. keep up that uniqueness!

that was a very low blow, lol...

do not, i repeat, do not ever do that to me again, next time, prepare somehow.don't know how, just please do ;)