You write well.

No, really. This is one of those /incredibly/ rare times I've no real criticisms to harangue the writer with.

You've created a story that's interesting and mysterious with that undeniable tang of horror mixed in. Very reminiscent of the early seasons of Supernatural that it's set in.

No, your story isn't perfect. Hell, you've got a dammed Mary Sue (albeit a low-key, tongue-in-cheek one) as the protagonist! But despite my loathing for Mary Sues, I love your story. Also, I've had a weak spot for Lacey ever since she killed that Sue, all the way back in Confessions of a Mary Sue.

Please don't be discouraged by your writer's block. I hope you haven't abandoned this for good, cause I really want to see this finished =)

oh, fun! me like! update soon please!

Hi :), well I just read you have writers block with this story, I'm so sorry for this! :( I love Lacey and I miss her stories and waiting for a new chapter!!

I hope this block can go soon, it not.. you can write more of the "The Things" stories ;). And if I sound stalkerish.. sorry, I just really love this universe :). Hugs, be well and take care.

Okay... after laughing with the other Mary-Sue stories this one seriously freaked me out and made me remember why I love/hate Supernatural even if I don't watch it! Is an amazing story I can't wait for more of it, the characters are truly well done, it flows really well and I want more, pretty please! Hugs, be well and take care.

Getting scary

At first I was a bit skeptical because I saw those hated words "Mary Sue", but I started reading out of sheer curiosity. I'm glad I did. Your character is brilliant. Sam and Dean are right on. This is fantastic. Kudos for taking the dreaded Mary Sue and making her rock.

PS It's really easy to get distracted by Kingdom Hearts II

oh my jeez that was creepy! ick. i need to take a shower after just thinking about that

m. dean's bed... ...sorry! fangirl moment! fantastic chapter!

My god you are so talented I just crack up all through your stories you are so totally Mary Sue and you so kick arse. God you're bloody brillant.

"stared back at him with the same resolve I had when I faced Aragorn and decided I was fighting in Helm’s Deep.

Take that buddy. If I could face a king I could face you."

That is just too funny.

oh, talk about a twist. didn't see that one coming!

Still loving it. My reviews probably aren't all that constructive, but hey, you should know I love this story. Waiting patiently for next chapter

Oh! This gets better and better, still love it and can't wait for your next chapter

GREAT WORK!

mm. love it when lacey argues with dean!

ohh my gawd i love this story i love how lacey is thrown into some kind of last action hero type stuff and i love her monologues please update soon