aww so sweet, the ending was all sweet and sugary, just the way i like it. and scotland eh? there a chance of a sequel? well lemme know. and yes your talent for battle scenes ain't so great but then mine isn't either so your no loner i can tell you that! lol. fantastic job, this has been really good to read.

-ultimate gammy91

This was amazing and so wonderfully done. Thank you for sharing it. It moved me, had me on the edge of my seat. All the things great fanficition should.

Thank you.

i love this story its so good
hopefully you will be starting a new one right away!!

Wow I'm a little sad that it's all over. Well, you did a fantastic job but you don't need me to tell you that because you can see how successful your story was by all the faithful reviewers you gained over the chapters.

I know what you mean about this site helping your English skills because mine have improved so much since I started writing. It's great when you can get good reviews but also constructive critasism.

Anyway, well done and keep up the hard work

GREEN EYES IS SUCH THE UBEREST SONG!

Ehem.

Well then, quite the conclusion! Woohoo, all's well again in the world. Yippee!!
I don't really have much to say except good work, happy new year, and a job well done!

Oh! R.E.M. I know them! Well, I actually only know that one song that everybody knows, 'Everybody Hurts'...but oh well. Actually, I'm sure I've heard others but I suppose I've never caught their names or realised that they were done by them.

Moving right along...

Yup, I know, I haven't been keeping up well at all...it's already finished! Bah! Oh well, at least this way there's no wait for the finale...
I quite liked this chapter. Insane Bella is always a bonus! Weird to see that she was sort of behind all of this...heheh nice twist, don't think I saw it coming! Still a bit of grammar trouble, but not that much. Besides, I'm tired of ratting on you about it; you're doing very well! Much improvement, and much kudos go out to you!

Onward the Finale!

I just read the whole thing in one sitting, loved it. You've definitely improved in your writing over the span of your story. You had an interesting plot and wrote the characters really well. Great story.

That was so fabulous! I loved that ending, it was so great!

Babelling? Bah! You have every right! Why didn't you win an oscar for that? Ok ok, I know that isn't possible...

it would have to be a pulitzer! Lol

I was one of those ppl who came across the story late, but I'm glad I did. It allowed me to notice just how much your writing grew throughout the chapters. Gramatically, thematically, in every which way. You should be proud.

Now to the story part. OMG SOO GOOD!! I really don't know what to say. And I don't know what you're talking about, the fight scenes were stupendous...I've never seen indiana jones...yes I know, I'm strange...but I know the famous boulder sequence and it was great! Action is extremely difficult to write because you really need the visual, but I was able to imagine the scenes play out in my head as if they were a movie...so maybe the oscar would be more appropriate? Aw, and everyone found their love, especially our beloved ROMY! YAY! I have to say that I nearly peed my pants when I read Jean-Luc's reaction to Rogue "I like her." Keep reading my story...it's coming. :O
HAHAHA and the comment about Bella was HILARIOUS! She was too crazy for my liking. I'm glad you kicked her out of the picture in an embarassing way...nothing works better than knocking down her sanity a few pegs! HAHAH

Well, Im running out of things to say. I can never remember everything i thought of when reading the story, I should take notes next time. Oh yes, that's my point. I eagerly await the NEXT TIME. I'm expecting another story...no "if"s, "and"s, or "but"s, you ARE WRITING ANOTHER ONE. I will wait. Start formulating a plot in that creative mind of yours...believe me I will read that one from the beginning...I'll go for first review!

Why are you still reading? Don't you have some writing to do? GO!

This was a great ending. I love how Remy was willing to risk so much for her, and their scenes together were just perfect. It was also nice to see the other couples realize how much they mean to each other.

A movie crossover sounds fun. How about Wedding Crashers? Also, the novel, Pride and Prejudice by Jane Austen seems like a nice fit for the couple.

Wow! This was so awesome! You ended it perfectly!

~Chica~

great chapter! update soon!

getting there plz keep up the good work...

I loved the confrontation between Gambit and Belle. Maybe now she finally understands she won't get him back. I liked seeing Remy on the verge of tears because of Rogue too. He's not one to cry even at the hardest of times, so this really says something about his feelings for her. I can't wait to see how the X-Men will rescue her.

Awesome chapter, mostly cause Remy is leaving Bella!!^_^