  Youichiix33 2008-11-07 . chapter 1THAT was sexy :D |
| IFdreamer 2008-08-20 . chapter 1 Virgin lips. Love that phrase. ^_^
Hahaha. The fic was okay, but hard to imagine. Kids really shouldn't be doing that. Ne? ;) |
| brownie 2008-06-18 . chapter 1 i completely understand.
same here, and doesn't it just BLOW?
bye, and keep writing! |
| Nekomimi-Chii 2008-06-09 . chapter 1 Awesomelly awesome! (If thats a word!? awesomelly?)
get what you mean (the is it too fluffy thing). My friend asks me for english homework -sigh- (me returning the favour) I write a romance. Ah, then your scared if making out is too fluffy. Hmmph. It's tough being a teenaget TT.TT |
| HinamoriSenna 2008-05-15 . chapter 1 That was actually good for a 13 year old at the time who'd never been kissed before.. (I had my first kiss when I was 10, but that's another story...) I can only write scenes like that because I've read so many fanfics, stories, and books like that.. true, I've kissed a guy before, but I stay away from makeout sessions >.>... |
| chocobang is sakura hayashi 2008-04-02 . chapter 1 nice |
| Kinky-Nami-Lass 2008-02-08 . chapter 1 haha i like it! v. funny |
| 'kaara-chan' 2008-01-18 . chapter 1 haha... it's cute. |
| Henseishi 2007-12-18 . chapter 1 damn.. that's very good for a 13-year-old!
HOT! o.0 |
| sakurachanfan6 2007-11-30 . chapter 1 oh so u r 13 and didnt kiss yet and well im 15 years old without a kiss from my prince charming T^T |
| Angel-NY 2007-11-17 . chapter 1 He.he.he. One of my favorites! You did a great job in this story. I love this! Please do more like this..ha!ha!ha! |
| sayopiyo 2007-10-12 . chapter 1 omg nice story xD im sure i cant write such a story xD |
| yaz13 2007-09-29 . chapter 1 ur ONLY 13?! ur so GOOD!
Its so cul
ang gling!! |
| Konnichiwa Minna 2007-09-12 . chapter 1 That was... (speechless)...
Amazing. Awesome. (seems my vocabulary is lacking in size right now...)
It was very cute. I liked the fact that she was making out with him, yet she didn't want him to see her panties! I definitely liked this!
I'm assuming you're 14 now, right? Wrong? Anyway, I'm 14 and have yet to kiss a guy. Well I did, but it was only a peck... plus he made a deal with me. I kiss him so I could hold his baby sister. (This happened at nighttime. It was a sleepover. And NO! It wasn't a sleepover with him, it was a sleepover birthday party with his sister, who is the same age as him. Anyway, he made that deal, because he liked me. I didn't like him... I just wanted to hold his baby sister so bad!) Anyway! That was kind of off topic. I love this fic, as well! :D |
| JC-zala 2007-08-12 . chapter 1 You're a 13-year old and you can actually write stuff like this? I bow down to you. This is one good one-shot. It got me all excited for them. |
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