i like the alt ending Soooooo much better..finders keepers indeed

:P

Go Wilson!

Loved the alternate ending! The kiss was written really well. Great job in using the transcript of a real General Hospital episode. That's a good idea.

. house is property of james wilson. lol. (cuteness!)

Alternate ending :-D (finals week lame reviews. Sorry.)

I like how you kept the last names... It made the alternate ending both more and less awkward: more in that it made the narration seem more detached than it could have been, and less in that it stayed truer to the show. I don't know if that makes sense-does it make sense?

Haha classic. The fact that that was an actual episode of general hospital is so funny. And depressing. But mostly funny. Well done!

Wow...that...kiss! I loved the detail into that one part! And you did really well keeping Wilson and House in character! Amazing!

*giggle*

Sweet!

:-)

Aww, that was cute! Oh boy, I don't know who I'm more jealous of, House or Wilson. :p

awesomely awesome with the awesomeness...you rule...and I'm apparently a surfer girl...huh.

Oh my gosh I'm still laughing as I write this. So, so, so funny, and definitely believable. You have House down to a T, honestly. And as funny as the show dialogue was in the beginning, I nearly died of hysterics when I found out at the end that it's an *actual transcript*. I knew I didn't watch soap operas for a reason...although I would if I could have House's sardonic commentary every other second. Wilson doesn't know what he has. :) Great story-thanks for writing!

that was totally wicked. the end was fricking awesome.

You are made of yummy. :D

Hehehe.. That's too funny. Love the way you had the two, they were very in-character, and the banter between them was great. Both chapters, the first by itself, and with the second, are funny and witty and very Houseian. Much fun to read. Loved Wilson sticking the post-it on House. Playful!Wilson comes out a bit, but I've seen many people kind of miss his sense of humour. That just seems like perfect Wilson-who-is-playful-but-really-shy-at-the-moment .

Thats sounds rather Native American. It might be too long though. Not sure it'll catch on.. Oh well.