duh. your grammar sucks. will you look at your summary? what the hell do you mean by "Will the web of secrecy spun around the Order of the Phoenix"? i thought "spun" is the past tense of "spin", unless i'm very much mistaken. where is the "grammatical air" now?

and pardon me, i don't capitalize.

Ooh, very clever! I quite like it. Fresh, original, and unusual, quite a rare gem amongst the HP universe. Couple of questions to clear up, does this take place during the summer of HBP? And was Adrian ever mentioned in the books? Anyways, many kudos to you for your wonderfully clear formatting and mercifully correct spelling! I love your imagery, and it actually calls to mind the writing style of JKR herself. Great job, I look forward to an update. (hint hint...)

Laura