Wonderful. You've got Leo down pat, and the emotions are strong and well-drawn. I could feel what Leo was feeling, even though I didn't even know these people. I love the detail of what he did in his car with Cindy; not *really* necessary to the story, but a nice sidebit and a fabulously written and realistic expression of grief. Great job.

Pullmanlover

Swear I was signed in. Anyway, this was really cool. I love stories that have pre-WH flashbacks or plotlines, 'specially those that involve Leo . . . question, was this supposed to explain the folded flag that's in Leo's office? Just wondering. Anyhow, lovely story, and keep up the fantastic work.

I usually don't review people's stories unless I really like them, and I really like all of yours. A lot of the stuff put up here, on this sits, is complete junk. But your stories aren't. I really like them and find them very interesting and true to the characters.

-Tash