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| Bonzai1990 2008-04-15 ch 1,  | abuseHeh... I like it! I liked the way that the story incorporated Gippal, as well as Auron! Hey have you done any like this for other characters? |
| Cat, Avatar for the DCG 2006-09-23 ch 1, | abuseThis is great, whatever reservations you have about it. A series of vinagettes, almost. Makes happy, cheerful Rikku a bit more three-dimensional without taking away her basic... Rikku-ness. SHe does have a problem with people leaving, and comming in second, doesn't she? "Always the bridesmaid, never the bride..." Maybe they don't have that saying in Al Behd. Good work though, don't get too wound up about it- there is only -so- much character development that can take place in so few thousands of words. |
| Lady of the Thorn 2006-06-16 ch 1, | abuseAgain, meant to leave a review. Sorry it's so late. But anyway, I really love this one. It's great. One of my favorite parts is the end. "Auron whispered, Rikku didn't listen And in her dreams she still flew." |
| wickedsugarrush 2006-06-01 ch 1, | abuseOh, your writing wasn't crappy! I enjoyed it. Melancholy, but sweet...ermm yea. I think bittersweet is the word? Yes. I liked it a lot it was impactful but lighthearted. You captured each time? Place? Flashback? Nicely, and with skill, so don't bash your self over the head mmkay? |
| Glass Mermaid 2006-05-29 ch 1, | abuseVery enjoyable. I especially like how Rikku 'hears' him, but doesn't listen. That says so much about her personality, and doesn't make the story sappy. A very good piece! |
| oddlyintrospective 2006-05-23 ch 1, | abuseI was snooping around LJ and saw the link you posted on PYREFLIES so I followed it and was blown away by this story. This is a gorgeous and absolutely stunning piece of writing! The flow is superb and the characterization is brilliant. I's simply a beautiful fic. I look forward to more (as well as reading that challenge fic!). :) |
| chaotic pink chocobo 2006-05-21 ch 1, | abusehey! chaotic_chocobo from over at LJ. I'm glad you posted it over here at |
| Killiko Jun 2006-05-18 ch 1, | abuseHey hey, it's tab from the aurikku comm XD I just wanted to say what an amazing story it is, and the flight and dream themes were so... romantic and bittersweet. When I read how she "hears" Auron, it gives me the impression that she's being haunted by her feelings, love or remorse or bitterness. Anyways, beautiful imagery and captured Rikku's character perfectly. Even tied it loosely to FFX-2 which was great :D |