Wow great story so far I would love to keep reading this

How sweet...it's nice to see that people write stories like this. Stories where the released pokemon becomes friends with another human, I mean. There seem to be so many where the pokemon hates humans forever; it's an awesome change to see. Great job!

Blaziken forever!

. Kairi

in a second chapter, sophie faces her blaziken's old trainer in a double battle, when blaziken comes out with another pokemon (say, ninetails), he sees the opponent and freezes out of shock. ninetails sees this and tries to cover for him, but fails and they are beaten... later that day, ninetails tells the other pokemon what happened and they try to help blaziken... ya like?

This is really great! This is a genre of Pokemon stories I love seeing; that is, a Pokemon is cruelly abandoned by a trainer / abused / just had a bad experience with humans. Then they finally learn to love again. Very well written, and I really connected with Blaziken here. His old trainer (not Sophie, the abusive one) is just that kind of person who doesn't have regard for animals' feelings and you made me really want to strangle him. Great job. Actually, I have a story with a similiar situation (a Lucario who's known nothing but torture at the hands of Team Galactic). If you want, you can check it out.

It was a great story how blaziken learn to trust humans again

Man... It's sad what Blaziken has been through. I'm glad things turned out better for him in the end. Awesome job!

What a great story! If you ever write a sequel could you please put Blaziken's old trainer in it as a Cipher Direct-Subordinate to Nascour(creepy guy in pokemon colloseum that you battle after 4 trainers in Tower Colloseum with SCARY music). Also could you somehow put me into the storyline (pls don't kill me or my Rayquaza off) pitting me against Sophie, joining her fight against Cipher [after losing to Sophie and her Fire-type team (which I have only 2 Pokemon suited to use against her and that's Groudon and Kyogre:)]

My team:

Espeon[male] Lv.68

Psybeam

Psycic

Return

Morning Sun

Groudon (nickname:Groundboss) Lv.80

Eruption

Fissure

Solarbeam

Kyogre (nickname:Waterlily) Lv.80

Water Spout

Sheer Cold

Double-Edge

Hydro Pump

Rayquaza (Mr. Quaza)Lv.90

Hyper Beam

Overheat

Thunder

Blizzard

Salamence[female](Dragonfire) Lv.50

Dragonbreath

Aerial Ace

Fire Blast

Earthquake

Gardevoir[female](same as Espeon-same name only lowercase)Lv.68

Psycic

Thunder

Shadow Ball

Destiny Bond :)

PS. I LOVE BLAZIKENS

PPS. I HATE Cipher

PS. I DO NOT USE POKEBALLS

Blaziken, you're the best! You're one of my favorite pokemon. Curse that trainer that abandoned you... GO SOPHIE!

Alright, now for the critique part: I loved your story. You didn't have any grammatical errors or spelling errors. You also had a good story line and a good vocabulary. However, you made an extremely short story. I suggest you prolong it. If not, you might want to make a sequel. And I'll be looking forward to it.

Bye!

Blaziken is one of my favorite pokemon. I'm glad you made a story for him. Please update soon!

question: how could a trainer re lese a torchick? i thought you couldn't relese starters

I L.O.V.E. Pokemon stories like this. More! I wante MORE!

That was amazing! I love how you write from the Pokemon's point of view, and this one I like especially, since Blaziken if my favorite pokemon. ROCK ON! XD

Ugh. Changed my e-mail-but make a mistake on it. If you want to my new one-go to my profile's e-mail. Aslo, I thought you were...for the lack of better words...dead. Looks like I was dead wrong on that one.

As for "ABOG", it's another good short and sweet eposide of yours' "random trainers'" fic. As May's Combuskien might say,

"Hot stuff!"

Logging off,

Dr. Thinker

Wow. Great story! Will you be writing more with this or is it a one shot?