Good story

halarious

Wonderful story, it was quick, light, amusing and easy to digest. Just what i needed today.

You (and your son) have a lot of talent.
Makin people laugh is something that should be mandatory in life!

This story was so funny. I loved it. Tell your son I saw some of his touches... You all need to collaborate on another when you get time in inspiration. And I totally agree with the whole goblet of fire thing. And no horcruxes... YAY!

Thanks.
Gene aka rom969

Was very good and different, nice Dursleys seemed to word as well kinda shame i finished was well worth the read

Wow! This was really good. And you said your 11 year old son co-authored? I wouldn't be surprised if he becomes an author!

great work

This was hilarious.
Harry's Hand Grenade.
What next, an M230

That was cute and very humorous!

Ha! Hilarious!

Very good story. I liked the bombs and the other tibits. The only thing is a .357 mag is still a very large gun and calibure. He would have trouble with the recoil. But still a very good choice for the fire power alone, but a .32 or a .22 would have done the same or even a 9mm. However your story your gun. I still liked it.

HAHAHA OH WOW!

This story was actually pretty interesting. Previously, I just read the first few chapters and wondered where the story would go from there. I enjoyed reading about the nice Dursleys. =)

Wonderful story. It's just a bit too out of the blue for me to completely stomach, but I liked the idea and your style of writing anyways. Thanks for the read so far!

I LOVED IT it was so funny i couldn't stop reading till the end

That was indeed a fun read!